c.whereas nearly six hours a week were spent in 1997 b. by 1997 that figure had grown to nearly six hours a week d. chores, compared with a figure of nearly six hours a week in 1997 c没有语法错误,但是不能表达出完成时态,即也许1996时数字不变,1997这一年突然增加的;并且才C的被动语态导致其表达不精准,又WHEREAS 连接两个完整的句子,6 HOURS WERE SPENT 不知道是用在什么上面了。被动语态也改变了句子重心。就像管大侠说的,语法题不一定都有语法错误,商业英文比较的是精准表达. d句尾过去分词前面不管有无逗号,都是修饰紧邻前面的名词,不能跳跃修饰
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