gwd30-1

titatita

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Q1:

The artist Renoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.

 

1. as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
2. as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged
3. as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged
4. during the arrangement of a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
5. while they arranged a bouquet of roses that had just been picked from his garden

   Answer: c

b为什么不对?

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hawkinsxie

unnecessary and awkward passive mode 

titatita

c也是被动语态啊

frostone

unnecessary "had been picked", C is concise.  Sweet!~

mymengming

being,讨厌的being!!!

到底选什么阿?

我感觉D蛮好的阿

titatita

A 1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

B1)had been和was being时态无法并列

  2)原句中just picked是rose修饰成分,B中变为并列成分成为从句谓语,中心改变

D.1)during the arrangement :awardward.

2)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

E1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

titatita

A 1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

B1)had been和was being时态无法并列

  2)原句中just picked是rose修饰成分,B中变为并列成分成为从句谓语,中心改变

D.1)during the arrangement :awardward.

2)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

E1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

titatita

A 1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

B1)had been和was being时态无法并列

  2)原句中just picked是rose修饰成分,B中变为并列成分成为从句谓语,中心改变

D.1)during the arrangement :awardward.

2)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

E1)garden in a vase逻辑不同,象火山在信里爆发那题.排除

  2)they指代不清

  3) Flower这个词在….得时候说,as后面用进行时态比较好.

lukewang1983

D为什么不对啊？

lazyratcn

D除了比较繁琐以为有没有啥语法致命错误阿