C Here is what I saw in another popular forum: D isn't so bad. Sound's "acoustic energy [is] prevented from being dissipated..." But why use the wordy passive transitive "being dissipated" when the one-word active intransitive "dissipating" is perfectly acceptable? In any case, what really turned be off to D is "as a result of." It is far more direct and precise to say "prevented by" than "prevented as a result of." I see nothing wrong with C. It's certainly not a run-on sentence: there's no conjugated verb after the comma. "Prevented" is the past participle. The second part of the sentence is saying that boundaries in the ocean prevent sound's acoustic energy from dissipating. The idea could be conveyed in two sentences: Sound can travel through water for enormous distances. Boundaries in the ocean... prevent its acoustic energy from dissipating. Combine the sentences and you get: Sound can travel through water for enormous distances, its acoustic energy prevented from dissipating by boundaries in the ocean....
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