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buddha0511

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

 

1. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

2. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

3. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

4. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

5. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

 答案是E，请问B哪里错了，是both的用法有误吗？

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zhangla

恩,后面的只有一种风格stride-piano tradition,所以不用both...and...
要是改成in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and xxxx of Duke Ellington, 那用both...and...好些.

buddha0511

原来如此，谢谢指点

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