GWD 30 两题请教

司香尉

以下是引用seastone在2006-5-26 0:03:00的发言：

618        School integration plans that involve busing between suburban and central-city areas have contributed, according to a recent study, to significant increases in housing integration, which, in turn, reduces any future need for busing.

(A) significant increases in housing integration, which, in turn, reduces

(B) significant integration increases in housing, which, in turn, reduces

(C) increase housing integration significantly, which, in turn, reduces

(D) increase housing integration significantly, in turn reducing（A）

(E) significantly increase housing integration, which, in turn, reduce

A 中的which 我认为和和GWD 30类似, 同样的是指代前面的整个事情.

这位兄弟，GMAT中绝对不能用which指代前面的整个事情的，要以OG为准

请OG74中对E的解释。

Growing competitive pressures may be encouraging auditors to bend the rules in favor of clients; auditors may, for instance, allow a questionable loan to remain on the books in order to maintain a bank's profits on paper.

(A)   clients; auditors may, for instance, allow

(B)   clients, as an instance, to allow

(C)  clients, like to allow

(D)  clients, such as to be allowing

(E)   clients; which might, as an instance, be the allowing of

 

E, aside from being wordy and imprecise, uses the pronoun which to refer vaguely to the whole preceding clause rather than to a specific noun referent. E用which来指代前面整个句子而不是一个名词
        错误
            

shanexin

OG里还能找到whether or not肯定错的解释

司香尉

OG87

Beyond the immediate cash flow crisis that the museum faces, its survival depends on if it can broaden its membership and leave its cramped狭窄的 quarters住处 for a site where it can store and exhibit its more than 12,000 artifacts.

(A)   if it can broaden its membership and leave

(B)   whether it can broaden its membership and leave

(C)  whether or not it has the capability to broaden its membership and can leave

(D)  its ability for broadening its membership and leaving

(E)   the ability for it to broaden its membership and leave

Choice A is faulty because it uses the unidiomatic construction depends on if;
                            whether is required to connect depends on with the clause beginning it can....
                                Choice C uses whether or not where only whether is needed, includes the awkward and wordy construction has the capability to, and unnecessarily repeats the idea of capability with
                            can. Choices D and E use unidiomatic constructions where the phrase its ability to broaden is required.
                            Choice B--idiomatic, concise, and correct--is best.

quanner

这题讨论过,选C啊

C的agree引导宾语从句,两个宾语动句的主语不一样,最好加that

B中的whether or not在GMAT中肯定是错的

OG里有解释,说是罗嗦

 

titatita

以下是引用shanexin在2006-5-19 10:47:00的发言：

红色的是GWD的答案

 

Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while they once ranged over virtually all of the continental United States except for a small strip in the extreme Southwest.

 

1. Elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, which would make it seem that elk are mountain dwellers, while　which能够指代前面的事情么:不能,所以肯定不能选c
2. The fact that elk now live almost solely in the Rocky Mountains would make it seem that they are mountain dwellers, but

3. It would seem that elk would be mountain dwellers because of their living now solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, but still
4. Now living almost solely in the Rocky Mountains, it would seem that elk were mountain dwellers, although
5. It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers from the fact that they now live solely almost in the Rocky Mountains, since

   Answer:

 b中make it seem that觉得很怪,有这种表达马?

我选c

 

Q29:

Researchers agreed that the study of new treatments for heart attack patients was extremely important but more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart attack patients than the balloon procedure by itself.

 

1. more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was or was not any better for heart attack patients than

   黄色部分奇怪的表达,看了大全,og,gwd1-13,24,28,17,18,天山4套都没见过这种表达be or be not any better

1. more research was needed for determining whether or not balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than is  whether or not记得在og里属于correctiveness的错误,b还有一个致命错误就是时态不一致

2. that more research was needed to determine whether balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is any better for heart attack patients than不

1. that more research was needed to determine that balloon angioplasty preceded with ultrasound was any better for heart attack patients than
2. that more research was needed for determining that balloon angioplasty preceded by ultrasound is or is not any better for heart attack patients than is

c,d,e that都错了.其实并不是因为有but 后面就不能用that,要看逻辑意思

agree that同意 and that就合理都同意

agree that but that就不合理了.

og里面有相关的例子

   Answer:

这题我看那个都不好

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