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shuhao2353

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacture in the office color-printing market.

A, million, which is part of a deal that will make

B, million, a part of a deal that makes

C, million, part of a deal making

D, million as a part of a deal to make

E, million as part of a deal that will make

A：用which指代前面整个句子，明显错误

B: makes时态不对

C：不是很明白为啥错，part of deal指代收购，表示是整个deal的一部分，making表示过程，即将实现，应该能理解啊

D/E：不是很理解有purchase sth. as part of sth.的用法吗？而且我还觉得D优于E，to make同样表将来、表目的，更简洁。

请NN指点：）

gonghao

根据时态来说will肯定是优先的选则

E,$950 million as part of a deal that will make

我的理解是：以$950 million 收购该公司的彩印业务作为整个交易的一部分，整个交易定语从句修饰，will表示将来

D的to do不定式表将来，不如will来的简明且逻辑意思更加明确了

hannah1112

好像ETS不倾向于在一个名词后面接TO DO修饰，在OG11上看到了几题，这样的结构都错，

请指教！！

gonghao

ETS的考试有一定的倾向，

再有will表是将来的时候，肯定倾向于will的

shanexin

以下是引用shuhao2353在2006-5-17 14:31:00的发言：

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacture in the office color-printing market.

A, million, which is part of a deal that will make

B, million, a part of a deal that makes

C, million, part of a deal making

D, million as a part of a deal to make

E, million as part of a deal that will make

A：用which指代前面整个句子，明显错误

B: makes时态不对

C：不是很明白为啥错，part of deal指代收购，表示是整个deal的一部分，making表示过程，即将实现，应该能理解啊

D/E：不是很理解有purchase sth. as part of sth.的用法吗？而且我还觉得D优于E，to make同样表将来、表目的，更简洁。

请NN指点：）

E用限制性定语从句明确表达了是那笔交易使得它变成最大的制造商

D，不定式表达是ｐｕｒｃｈａｓｅ这件事情导致了它成为最大

C，分词ｍａｋｉｎｇ修饰没有岐义，限制性修饰ｄｅａｌ，但是前面的逗号不好，可以理解为ａｎｎｏｕｎｃｅ也是就是ｐａｒｔ　ｏｆ　ａ　ｄｅａｌ

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