TOEFL Essay checklist (Sharing)

springqi · 发表于 2006-4-20 16:40:00

TOEFL Essay checklist
	Do I have an interesting introductory sentence?
	Do I have a thesis?
	Does my introduction state the topics that I plan to cover?
	Does each paragraph have a topic sentence?
	Do I use examples and reasons to support my points?
	Is my spelling and punctuation correct?
	Do I use simple grammatical structure that I am comfortable with?
	Do I use transitional phrases?
	Have I covered both sides of an issue fairly?
	Did I prove my thesis?
	Does my conclusion end with an interesting thought or idea?

springqi · 发表于 2006-4-20 16:50:00

The example below could be for or against.

	Introduction: Three sentences	Present situation and/or Both sides of Argument (1-2 sentences) What you are going to do in this essay / Your opinion (Thesis sentence)

	Paragraph 2 Five Sentences	Topic Sentence: Argument 1 or Reason 1 Example, Explanation, or supporting detail (2-4 sentences)

	Paragraph 3 Five Sentences	Topic Sentence: Argument 2 or Reason 2 Example, Explanation, or supporting detail (2-4 sentences)

	Paragraph 4 Five Sentences	Topic Sentence: Argument 3 or Reason 3 Example, Explanation, or supporting detail (2-4 sentences)
		.
	Conclusion Three Sentences	Summary Present situation and your opinion Future statement

springqi · 发表于 2006-4-20 16:57:00

Two sides of an argument

Give the other side's opinion, and then give YOUR opinion

Give the other side

Some people think that…
Although many people feel that…
It is claimed that…
Some people feel that…

One sentence (While, although)

While it is true that… … I believe…
Despite the fact that millions of people die every year from lung cancer, many people think it is cool to smoke.
Although many people think that…., I feel that
Although it is often said that…, in fact the opposite is true

Two sentences

It is undoubtedly true that… …However…
It is often argued that… However, it is
Some people say that… They claim… However, I feel…
Supporters of this viewpoint say that… However, it is

One sentence (While, although)

While it is true that… … I believe…
Despite the fact that millions of people die every year from lung cancer, many people think it is cool to smoke.
Although many people think that…., I feel that
Although it is often said that…, in fact the opposite is true

springqi · 发表于 2006-4-20 17:03:00

Should parents use corporal punishment to discipline children?

Corporal Punishment

Effective when used wisely

Many parents use physical punishment to discipline their children. Others prefer to use different methods to reward good behavior or punish misbehavior. This essay will look at some of the arguments for and against physical punishment of children.

It is often claimed that physical punishment will damage children in later life. Opponents of corporal punishment claim that the children will grow up to become delinquents or even beat their wives. However, many happily married adults today were slapped when they were younger but have never hit their spouses. Another point often made is that physical punishment teaches children that you can use force to make others do what you want. In fact children brought up well soon learn that force by itself is nothing - it must be associated with right. Finally, some people say that punishing a child by smacking him will damage the relationship between the child and the parents. This is clearly wrong. Children who understand the reasons for rules will be happier than children who are not given clear guidelines.

There are definitely concerns about physical punishment. Some parents lose control and can injure children - even breaking bones or causing bruises. Others can use violence excessively or as the only method of discipline. In this case, the child will be hurt, fearful and anxious and will not learn to distinguish right from wrong. The biggest problem with physical violence is when it is not appropriate to the age of the child. It can be very effective to quickly smack a two-year-old who is screaming. However, it is not effective to beat a 16-year-old who is late for school once again.

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

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TOEFL Essay checklist (Sharing)