885/s12/18请教高手

mzyzhu

18.    Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.
(A) the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom
(B) the higher profits that are made in the placement of highly paid professionals, requests for whom
(C) from the requests for highly paid professionals, who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests
(D) from highly paid professionals, whose placement makes higher profits for the agencies and whose requests
(E) from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom

答案位E.但是把E带入，是否成为一个run on sentence。...agencies benefit not only from ... but also from ...逗号requests for whom have increased ...。2个完整的句子，没有连接词，中间使用逗号而不是分号连接。

merlion

requests for whom... 定语从句修饰 professionals. run-on sentence 也得用 request 呀, agencies 是复数

tigercat

我一直认为是个同为语

而且CDE中，from后的词只有E逻辑意思对，其他两个不通

merlion

如果是同位于的话, 同位于requests for whom (或 requests) 后应有修饰语 或定语从局修饰. 而且, requests是 professionals的同位于? 不通呀.

不管怎样, 能选对就可以了.

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gemj

改错中正确选项是不可能出现RUN－ON句型的。将正确选项代入是

Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

requests是名词，意思是something asked for，whom是professionals的引导词，引导的是从句，从句的谓语是have increased。requests for whom have increased是多么完美的组合啊！

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braveMBA

我理解"requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers."
在这里充当同位结构。这有些类似OG190。而那个REQUEST FOR是补出的修饰名词，类似于....., findings which......，类似于OG138。

194. Presenters at the seminar, one who is blind, will demonstrate adaptive equipment that allows visually impaired people to use computers.
A.one who
B.one of them who
C.and one of them who
[D.one of whom]
E.one of which

OG 138
38. Scientists have observed large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twenty centimeters of Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there.
A.    Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there
B.    Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistent with these findings
C.    Baltic Sea sediments, findings consistent with its growth of industrial activity
D.    sediments from the Baltic Sea, findings consistent with the growth of industrial activity in the area
E.    sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrial activity there

dandan74

同意braveMBA.

mzyzhu

感谢各位的讲解。不是抬杠，还是有些不明白。

首先（requests for whom）主语 （have increased）谓语 in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.是个句子。句子好像不能成为同位语，如果可以请举一个例子？

其次，request for whom中的whom 也不是定语从句的标志。至少从我目前的知识而言。one of whom 是定语从句，fourteen of which are officially recognized， many of which were chiseled from solid rock...是定语从句也没有问题。但是要说request for whom时定语从句可能还需要一些决定性的证据。

但是如果没有打印错误，分号变成逗号之类的东东，这个句子可能又只能被看作定语从句。

看来这个句子还有在讨论的空间。

viv

比较同意这是一个定语从句， 应该是一个比较特殊的定语从句
request for whom, 中心词是request, 和前面的professionals 不应该是同位的关系

况且
194. Presenters at the seminar, one who is blind, will demonstrate adaptive equipment that allows visually impaired people to use computers.
A.one who
B.one of them who
C.and one of them who
[D.one of whom]
E.one of which

D 也应该是一个定语从句，而不是同位语吧

braveMBA

from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals,
                                      |
                                      | requests是整个这句话的指代名词
                                      |
                          同位结构   requests for whom....
                                                                 后面是定语从句

这个request for 是同前面的demand for对应的内容。

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