[原创]AWA5.5一点感想附摩版@@作文没感觉的还剩没几天的都来看看@@AWA5.5一点感想附摩版

darlingbobo

情人节那天考得，意料之中的600+，今天查了查分数，作文5.5，很高兴呀。受益CD很多，作为回报，写点感想。AWA总共准备了5天左右，前两天各花一晚上分别浏了一遍issue和argu的题目，第三天开始找网上的摩版，随便背了一篇issue的，最后两天完全用在了作文上，第四天开始练习，发现之前背的摩版局限性很大，而且遣词生涩，死背下来的东西写出来完全没有感觉，重新整理摩版，背，最后一天是练习，一天里面大约练了10几篇，打字的手感和时间的把握一定要有，考试当天才能顺手。

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argument，对于这个摩版我还是很骄傲的，虽然没有几句话是我自己想的，但是结构完整，背诵方便，词句闪光，最主要是百试百灵。

In this argument, the author relies on certain anecdotal evidence about ________, as well as the unreliable statistics(comparison) about the general trend among________, to convince us of the conclusion that____________. This argument, appears to be reasonable at the first glance, suffers some critical flaws that seriously undermine the conclusion after the close scrutiny, and according is not thoroughly well-reasoned. The main flaws of the argument would be discussed respectively.

In the first place, the validity of the survey on which the argument relies is doubtful in itself because the survey cited by the author is too vague to be informative. Turning to the proceduce of the survey, the arguer neither mention when and how the survey is conducted, nor does it indicate what the sample size is and how the sample is selected( the other relevant circumstance involving the survey). Until these questions are answered, the result of this survey is worthless as evidence to support the conclusion. 样本错误基本上每个题目都可以套，基本不用改动，黄标和括号内容可以互换。

In the second place, it is necessary to point out another flaw that significantly undermines this argument that the auther engaged in "after this ,therefore, because of this" reasoning. The line of this augument is that because A before B, the former directly caused the later./ the auther unfairly assumes that us as readers must make an either-or choice between_______and______. However, the auguer fails to provide any justification to guarantee that these two are indeed mutually exclusive alternatives./ the author commits the fallacy of "all things are equal", and unfairly assumes that A will remain unchanged over the next decades. On account of too limited evidence of the comparsion/ conclusion, author can hardly convince us that___________.这段中间的三色标出来的充分考虑了七宗罪，挑一个出来讲讲就可以了。

Last but not the least, granted that the author justifies all the foregoing assumptions, the conclusion remains to be doubtful since it fails to establish a causal connection between _________and ______. Without evidence to support the causal connection between these two events the consideration is still unwarranted. 这段是凑字的，这样的逻辑错误总归有的，一定要写。

In a word, this augument, while seems well-supported at first, has several flaws as discussed above. Hence it is unacceptable and of no persuasion as it stands. Yet, it could be substantiated by providing more solid evidence that__________. Accordingly, only with more logical reasoning could this augument turn to be more than just an emotional appeal. 结尾一定要提出点改进意见，就完整了。

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-3-13 22:40:28编辑过]

darlingbobo

issue的摩版基本参考了一个大牛摩版，也是白搭的，主要是加点例子，自己的观点多重复重复。

复述题目。As a matter of fact, the issue of whether_________ is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there are no easy or certain answers to this question, and the final judgement should rely on a case-by-case analysis. On balance, my points of agreement and contention with the speaker involve the fundamental and deep discussions as below.

Firstly, to some extent I agree with the speaker's general assertion on the basis of that___________________. The argument that can be presented to develop my position is that________________. A good example may be found in the case that______________. Under this circumstance, it is obvious that________.

Secondly, I have to point out my contention with the speaker who overstating________'s comparative significance. The reason is not far to seek, ____________. To illustrate, let us consider that_____________. Hence, another equally important aspect is that __________.

Finally, it maybe true that ______________ in some conditions. However, this alone does not consititute a sufficient support to claim that _________. Actually, these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen the vies that___________. When the advantages and disadvantages of X and Y are carefully examined, the more striking conclusion is obvious that ____________.

In a word, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes interrelate with each other ot generate an integrate whole and thus become more convincing than any single on of them, we may be comfortable to say that _________ because __________.

这个摩版看起来也就平平无奇，不过gmat作文到底还是模式化一点比较好，尤其是功底没有很扎实的。我的一个好朋友英语交流已经完全没有问题，T660，G740，作文也就4.5，而她完全不准备摩版的。

另外说一句，我是先把摩版整个背出写好，再在里面加内容的。一来因为背到一半打断了，有可能背不下去，另外也防止漏掉什么。issue的摩版写完大约15分钟，剩下15分钟加内容。还有就是多练几篇一定一定需要。

大伙参考参考把。

darlingbobo

写的很辛苦，希望多点人看到

hhl3000

板凳!

jinni

谢谢！

上网的蚊子

顶!~呵呵

完全同意此方法

lixiang1111

真的很感谢！！

xjlv128

祝贺祝贺哦

lyyforever

谢谢分享！

pumpkin

写得好！感谢