小兵张嘎的语法难题之十一

小兵张嘎

1、(From 1900 until the 1920’s ceiling fans were very popular , and now the renewed interest in them has begun )when the energy crisis in 1974 forced homeowners to look for alternative methods of heating and cooling.
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2、
A、    (Despite no proof that the consumption of any particular foods reverse hardening of the arteries, studies indicate that refraining from eating certain foods could) help reverse blockage of coronary arteries, the blood vessels that feed the heat.

E、 although it has not been proved that the consumption of any particular food will reverse hardening of the arteries , studies indicate that refraining from eating certain foods can)…
答案是E，可A错在哪儿？


3、
A、Rising inventories , (when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead )to production cutback that would hamper economic growth.

E、 if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead…

A错在哪儿？


4、
The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek (world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month. )
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5、
The Audubon Society and other conservation groups,
  concerned over what they have perceived to be the
  serious threatening of the environment as posed by
  the policies of the government, are preparing for a
  major political effort.

  (A) have perceived to be the serious threatening of
      the environment as
  (B) perceived as the serious threat to the environ-
      ment as
  (C) perceive being the serious threat to the environ-
      ment
  (D) are perceiving as the serious threatening of the
      environment
  (E) perceive as the serious threat to the environment

hexin

1。 has begun的 现 在 完 成 时 与 now 以 及 when从 句 的 过 去 时 不 一 致 ， 可 谓 时 态 混 乱 。
2。Despite引 导 的 介 词 词 组 一 般 修 饰 的 是 简 单 的 名 词 而 不 是 复 杂 的 名 词 性 从 句 ， could也 应 换 成 can才 与 主 句 时 态 更 一 致 。
3. correspondingly应 该 修 饰 的 是 sales， 而 不 是 unaccompanied
4。 during只 能 修 饰 持 续 性 的 动 词 ， 修 饰 proclaim不 可 以
5。 A， D 的 threatening不 对 ， threaten本 身 就 是 名 词 ， 不 能 再 用 动 词 ； B中 时 态 与 后 面 的 现 在 时 不 一 致 ，as也 没 道 理 ； C， being加 adj.在 GMAT中 通 常 都 错 ， GMAT认 为  being多 余 。 答 案 只 能 是 E。

smilinglan

2、
A、 (Despite no proof that the consumption of any particular foods reverse hardening of the arteries, studies indicate that refraining from eating certain foods could) help reverse blockage of coronary arteries, the blood vessels that feed the heat.

E、 although it has not been proved that the consumption of any particular food will reverse hardening of the arteries , studies indicate that refraining from eating certain foods can)…
答案是E，可A错在哪儿？

同意hexin的观点！despite 后面不能跟句子，通常要改成although.并且could 的时态与indicate的不一致。

[此贴子已经被作者于2003-4-7 14:46:10编辑过]

smilinglan

以下是引用小兵张嘎在2003-4-1 20:17:00的发言：

3、
A、Rising inventories , (when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead )to production cutback that would hamper economic growth.

E、 if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead…

A错在哪儿？

这里取决与unaccompanied的意思。它不是个动词加ed的形式，而是一个形容词，翻译为无伴奏的，所以后面不能跟by 的形式。