[讨论]GWD1-2

mutegirl

像这样的题目，会不会是测试题目啊，我也觉得b更好些，前面短语使用正确，后面which跳跃指代。

micyuanfei

A.       their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
            

一个错误在于：their——应该是单数

B.       from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
            

C.       to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
            

错误在于：“in their share”这样的话，increase就没有宾语了。在increase in productivity/stocks/value和某些increase of …的情况中，increase是名词。

D.      in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
            

错误同上

E.       to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

错误在于：通常我们不说to 10 from 6，除非特别强调to的宾语。本题明显是语气平缓的陈述，完全没有必要将to提前。

ivyqxx

再次做到这道题，个人觉得B的跳跃指代没问题；E中出现了双重所有格，这是OG明确反对的。

nn们继续讨论~

paul2006

难啊

minatong

还是选E吧,E里面没有双重所有格吧..应该是没有错误的，to..from的用法og里也出现过。

GMAT语法是选最好答案，那E比B更没有错误可挑，B还有which指代的问题呢