[讨论]OG11th-105

seasnow

105.  Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.

(A) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,

(B) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, having the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, a technique called proton induced x-ray emission

(C) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,

(D) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying it,

(E) A technique that was originally developed for detecting air pollutants and has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance, called proton-induced x-ray emission,

选E？

v521

A

1.can is preferable than has the ability

2.that was... and has...and without...        confused

3.what called ... refered to?

Evelyn2005

我也觉得A更好一些。

wycg

嗯.A比E要好.

shinta42

OG 的正确答案是什么呢?

wild

I think it should be A.
Agree with the second floor.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-3-11 11:16:18编辑过]

RayBear

og11th上有着导体，答案是A

peterchang

Rhetorical construction

The original sentence successfully avoids the problems that may occur in a long sentence with multiple modifiers. The sentence opens with the modifier originally developed for detecting air pollutants. This participial phrase is immediately followed by the word technique that it modifies; technique is in turn followed by the phrase called proton-induced X-ray emission. Finally, the non-restrictive clause which ... destroying it is correctly placed next to emission and set off from the rest of the sentence by a pair of commas.

　　A Correct. The modifiers are all correctly placed

B        Placement of two long modifiers at the beginning of the sentence is awkward and makes it difficult to locate the subject, second modifier (having...) actually modifies the first modifier

C        Called proton-induced X-ray emission should be placed next to a technique and should not be set off by commas; relative clause introduced by which incorrectly and illogically modifies emission

D      Called proton-induced X-ray emission should be placed next to a technique and should not be set off by commas; relative clause introduced by which incorrectly and illogically modifies emission; has the ability to is wordy

E       Called proton-induced X-ray emission should be placed next to a technique and should not be set off by commas; has the ability to is wordy

The correct answer is A.

以上是OG的解答，我想问的是C&D都说which不指代 emission，那推测应该是指代technique，可是他们都跟A一样接在emission，怎么办别他是在修饰techniuqe而不是emission？

sunnysmell

同问，为什么OG说A,which refers to a technique; C, which refers to emission
A. Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze ...

C. A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze ...

peterchang

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