[讨论]OG11th-15

seasnow

15.  The Iroquois were primarily planters, but supple­menting their cultivation of maize, squash, and beans with fishing and hunting.

(A)        but supplementing

(B)        and had supplemented

(C)        and even though they supplemented

(D)        although they supplemented

(E)    but with supplementing

选D？不太懂，谁讲一下？谢谢！感觉有点像那道with meat as a rarity，又不太像，说不上来。

carolhide

D

1.原文为转折，这个要保留下来，不是用but就要用although，排除B，C

2.A，The construction using supplementing fails to support the intended meaning of the sentence.

  E, But with is awkward and unclear; supplementing is a modifier when contrasting clause is needed

wycg

15.  The Iroquois were primarily planters, but supple­menting their cultivation of maize, squash, and beans with fishing and hunting.

易洛魁族人主要以耕种为主,尽管他们也以鱼猎来补充他们耕种的玉米,南瓜,豆子.

前后句因该用although 连接.

seasnow

谢谢二位！

babypigsxm

解释中说C的even though creates a sentence fragment是什么意思？

super_pig

以下是引用babypigsxm在2006-3-10 13:10:00的发言：
解释中说C的even though creates a sentence fragment是什么意思？

解释中是说and even though creates a sentence fragment

香香茶

以下是引用babypigsxm在2006-3-10 13:10:00的发言：
解释中说C的even though creates a sentence fragment是什么意思？

因为EVEN THOUGH前有AND这个并列连词来连接，那么后面要连接的是独立分句，可是EVEN THOUGH引导的句子只有从句，没有主句，故sentence fragment.

香香茶

另外，OG解释说

The logic of the sentence also argues against a construction that would set the two clauses and the importance of their content equal when they clearly should not be.

其实就是解释为什么用从属连词although而非并列连词and或but的原因。从属和并列最大的区别就在于，把次要的思想内容置于结构上的从属地位，从而突出句子的主要思想。OG的解释也说明了这个道理，OG说其错误的原因在于将两个分句给予同样的重要性，而该句的逻辑意思清楚的表明原本不该这样。说明要用的是从属连词而非并列连词，故答案中只有D项although符合。

feiqtx

楼上的MM解释的很透彻啊！

再向你求证一下：

AND和BUT只能连接地位相同、功能相同的成分。对不对？

本题中，单纯从语法上看，把A选项改为

The Iroquois were primarily planters but /and supple­menting their cultivation of maize, squash, and beans with fishing and hunting.

即：primarily planters 和supple­menting用BUT /AND 连接，并列做WERE的宾语。

这样使用BUT/AND对不对？supple­menting前面要不要补充WERE？

这样考虑有没有问题？

请香香茶MM解惑！

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-4-16 23:03:28编辑过]

香香茶

首先，和很多前辈讲的一样，我也不推崇修改答案来比哪个正确。

其次，单从语法角度来看的话，我以为以上的改法也是不好的。OG中曾经多次强调并列分句之间要用逗号隔开，那么至少BUT/AND前要加逗号，分句中的主谓要补齐。如果你不用逗号，BUT/AND连接的就必须是语法平行的结构，通常为名词或分句，此时可共用一个谓语，例子如下：

He said that he was busy today but that he would be free tomorrow.