pp text 1 （语法讨论）

liul781

72. The brightly colored kingfisher that perches
   until it sights a fish, then dives into the water
   to catch its prey.
觉的是brightly不对


85. The various peoples who developed
   North America have made it a world
   leader economic .
不知道怎么改。这句话符合make的句型么？make it adj to st ;make it adj that;make st adj; make adj st


87. The piano as it is known today represents
   a long series of experiments extend back
   to the year 1711, or perhaps even earls
是不是改为extended?


89. Prehistoric villagers tended to work harder, suffer
   from more diseases, and eat the poorer diet than
   nomadic hunters did.
是把tended改为tend，还是把the去掉?


128. Small to medium-sized marsh birds similar in
    body shape by cranes, rails are found throughout
    the world, except in the polar regions.
如把by改为as，此句如何分析？


142. Through his paintings, Edward Hopper depicted
    the isolation, lonely, and lack of variety of the daily
    life of small-town America
lonely改为loneness,variety前为何不加a？



59. Although _________ instant critical acclaim in 1952,
   he never completed a second novel, publishing many
   short works instead.

         Invisible Man was the first novel by
            Ralph Ellison received  
         first received by Ralph Ellison, the novel
            Invisible Man was  
         Ralph Ellison's first novel, Invisible Man,
            received  
         Ralph Ellison's first novel, Invisible Man,
            was received
C为何错



60. Sauropods had _________ smallest brains relative
   to body weight of any group of dinosaurs, yet they
   were among the most successful of all dinosaurs
   in evolutionary terms.

                 what was a
                 when a
                 of the
                 the
A为何错


  i am eager for your answer

困难是弹簧

72. the brightly colored kingfisher that perches
   until it sights a fish, then dives into the water
   to catch its prey.
*************************
that perches---->perches


85. the various peoples who developed
   north america have made it a world
   leader economic .
**********************
MAKE STH STH     leader economic---> economic leader


89. prehistoric villagers tended to work harder, suffer
   from more diseases, and eat the poorer diet than
   nomadic hunters did.
是把tended改为tend，还是把the去掉?
********************
THE多余

困难是弹簧

142. through his paintings, edward hopper depicted
    the isolation, lonely, and lack of variety of the daily
    life of small-town america
lonely改为loneness,variety前为何不加a？

a  variety of 只是variety用法之一，这里是说日常生活的多样性，而不是强调许多日常生活。

yongchou

哇! Tough challenges; no underlining.

72.) (that perches)---> perches

liul781

thanks,please go on