“Because occupancy rates for campus housing fell during the last academic year, so did housing revenues. To solve the problem, campus housing officials should reduce the number of available housing units, thereby increasing the occupancy rates. Also, to keep students from choosing to live off-campus, housing officials should lower the rents, thereby increasing demand.”
错误感觉挺多的,但是好像全是gratuitous assumption? (好像还有Insufficient sample----这个是万金油)反驳时虽然内容不同但连续三段是同一种错误模式可以吗?能否指点一下还有什么其他方面的错误?
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