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[原创]7天复习,大陆赴香港机考290,作文满分(魔板在21楼),分享心得

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-1-8 21:47:00 | 只看该作者

好几个朋友问到了作文魔板,这里和大家分享。但是提醒大家,最好自己修改一下,一是便于自己记忆,而是雷同的文章可能反而对评分不利!

Recently there is a debate over whether …..Some people assert that.., while other people believe that…As a matter of fact, the issue of whether ….. is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their distinct backgrounds. Therefore, there is not a universal answer to this question, and whether one choice takes precedence over the other may quite depend on the specific situation. The decision, nevertheless, is not an easy one to make.  Actually, the final judgment should rely on a case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, however, I agree that …. , and do not agree that….. My view can be greatly substantiated by the following discussions.

The first argument that can be presented to develop my position is that… A good example may be found in the case that… Under this circumstance, it is obvious that….

In addition, there is another reason for me to choose this statement. The reason is not far to seek…. To illustrate, let us consider that … Hence, another equally important aspect is that….

Admittedly, it may be true that …. in some conditions. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that ….,Actually, these cases are rare and therefore are too specific and too weak to strengthen the view that…When the advantages and disadvantages of x and y are carefully examined, the most striking conclusion is obvious that…

To sum up, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other  to generate an integrate whole and thus become more convincing than any single one of them, we may be comfortable to say that …., because….


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22#
发表于 2006-1-20 21:20:00 | 只看该作者
THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!!!!
23#
发表于 2006-1-23 13:53:00 | 只看该作者

我托福就用的这个模版。分还没出来。

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发表于 2006-1-26 17:08:00 | 只看该作者
我马上就要考了,希望和你一样的高分,之后一定回报大家!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-2-9 17:18:00 | 只看该作者

Wish you all good luck!

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发表于 2006-2-9 20:54:00 | 只看该作者

thanks for sharing


good luck!

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发表于 2006-2-9 22:12:00 | 只看该作者
Thx for sharing.
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发表于 2006-2-12 06:40:00 | 只看该作者
謝謝分享
29#
发表于 2006-2-12 12:33:00 | 只看该作者
不错.
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发表于 2006-2-15 11:43:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢分享


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