[求助]什么叫做run-on sentence

etone

对语法的时候，在OG上看到以下说法

use the word ungrammatically and produces a run-on sentence.

想不起来什么叫run-on sentence了，谁能帮忙说说，非常感谢！

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vrylwj

句子1，句子2。这样就叫run on sentence.

koala0518

我這邊稱run on sentence為"碰撞句"
就是一句話sentence里有二個clause, 但中間沒用用"連詞"(如:and)隔開來,
這樣是不符合語法的,遇到這種選項(必錯)就不列入考慮了.

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Zeros

用中国的说法就是：逗号连句子，错。

atongmu

楼上的说法好像不够确切，举例如下：
135. Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and (now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of) those in the United States.
(A)    now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of
(B)    now draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors, both those who live abroad and those who live
(C)    it draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors now, both those living abroad and who live
(D)    draws now on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and who are
(E)    draws on the works now of both contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and those

这里用and连接2句句子，但也属于run-on。

etone

以下是引用atongmu在2003-9-8 17:29:00的发言：
楼上的说法好像不够确切，举例如下：
135. Intar, the oldest Hispanic theater company in New York, has moved away from the Spanish classics and (now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of) those in the United States.
(A) now it draws on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors who live abroad and of
(B) now draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors, both those who live abroad and those who live
(C) it draws on the works of contemporary Hispanic authors now, both those living abroad and who live
(D) draws now on the works both of contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and who are
(E) draws on the works now of both contemporary Hispanic authors living abroad and those

这里用and连接2句句子，但也属于run-on。

why? can someone explain it in detail? thanks a lot!!

atongmu

以下是引用etone在2003-9-8 17:32:00的发言：

why? can someone explain it in detail? thanks a lot!!

因为第二句句子中的主语和第一句相同，应该省略主语，如果不省略而用了it做主语，也成为run-on sentence.