GWD-17-18

Winbolin

以下是引用cournot在2006-7-17 4:52:00的发言：

又看了一遍，现在同意C,

1. Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.不平行
2. Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery. 这里due to...,inaddition to ...有问题
3. With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

4. The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, (+conj) the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.加连词

5. Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.

D前半句整句是名詞片語, 都沒有謂語, 為何後句需要加连词conj.??

MaccMichAA

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MaccMichAA

楼上de牛牛们

弱弱地说 强因果as a result of and because应该比with来得好一点

A是比较对称的

yangxuemei0111

我觉得D正确

wcfang

以下是引用yangxuemei0111在2006-10-18 2:04:00的发言：

我觉得D正确

D錯在前面一整串名詞與主詞output表同位語，這在邏輯上是錯誤的

lxzjojo

虽然A有些怪怪的，但系绝对比C好。

C有不少硬伤呐，一看就不顺眼，比如说with啦，charcoal’s being啦，这些都是GMAT中一看就可以排除的东东啊。。。

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-2 16:33:27编辑过]

zxz1818

应该是A. 请看OG 204.

In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding, in part that their steers should
acquire certain characteristics and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor.
(A) in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics
(B) in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers
(C) partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics
(D) partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers
(E) partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers (E)

该题并不非常平行.

C的问题,本是两个原因促使output tripled, C 产生歧义:

With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as (the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery), the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
    

the fuel used... and improvements 均用来修饰 charcoal being replaced.

open to discuss

duncan1201

A)...


    

B) modifier problem: the last phrase modifies what ?


C) use of prossessive "charcoal’s" is wrong


D) run-on-sentence


E) modifier problem: the relative clause modifies what ?

utena

ding!同问

B中除了被动不好，in addition to又有什么问题呢？

查了很多帖子都没看到的说。。

sabrina07

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