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How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Mine article:
In now modern society, as the development and the improvement of movies and television, more people are now affected by them than before. You may have noticed that many people started to talk in a Joey or Ross way after the teleplay Friends is on, or you may find that more people now use “You jump I jump” to show their pure love which is just a line from the movie Titanic, or you could hear some persons commence to assert that they think big mouth is very beautiful and can shows personality only because （朱利亚罗伯茨）,a famous movie star, happens to have one.

Why do people’s behaviors appear like that? I think there some reasons lies there:
First, movies or TV programs create such a perfect world for us ,which has no war, no illness, no life confusion, no workforce. In that world, they will feel certain relax and comfortable which they won’t get in the real world. And as techniques develop, people can feel more reality in this unreal world. So now, more and more people prefer to watch TV or movies rather than do anything else after their whole-day work to release their tense spirit.

Another reason is that TV programs or movies have affected us so much is that not everybody considers themselves to be perfect. For instance, some guys may think they are not humorous, while some young women may think they are less of beauty in particular part of their body. Then these young men are likely to start to talk in a Joey way, which is the way a famous TV star talk, and these young women may commence to change their hair styles, clothes, or even part of their body such as nose in order to get themselves look like their idols. In their minds, if they appear like their idols, they will be more popular in their friends. Despite whether this thought right or wrong, this behavior does bring them self-confidence.

From all the reasons above, we can make it clear that why and how we are influenced by TV programs and movies. And to my opinion, if we can get relaxation or  self-confidence from these media masses, this influence seems not bad. But the thing we should is to make sure that the influences are good ones, and won’t do anything wrong to our behaviors.

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