【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day98

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Day98
8.(578)A crippling disorder for many young women, anorexia nervosa is when issues of control and distorted body image result in a dangerously low weight within the context of age, developmental trajectory, and physical health.
A) A crippling disorder for many young women, anorexia nervosa is
B) A crippling disorder that affects many young women, anorexia nervosa is
C) Anorexia nervosa is a crippling disorder for many young women,D) Anorexia nervosa is a crippling disorder for many young women;
E) A crippling disorder for many young women, anorexia nervosa develops

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When you see answer choices with the restrictive "comma which"' modifier, you shouldseize on that as a primary decision point. Here, clearly it wasn't "rabies" that led to theeradication of other diseases, and the presence of the other modifier in the answerchoices ("an event) should show you that the intended meaning of the sentence isthat the event (the development of the rabies vaccne) is what led to those eradication.So you can confidently eliminate A, B, and E for the modifier error.
Choice D avoids the modifier error, removing the modifier and using the conjunction"and." But that suggests that "an event leading to..." is a separate entity (one of twothings Pasteur developed? A second, vague item to which we can tie the beginning ofthe modern medicine era?). This is incorrect, as well, leading you to answer choice C.Choice C uses a more flexible, less restrictive modifier ("an event" - appositivemodifiers at the ends of sentences get a lot of leeway) to correct the problems in theother choices, and is therefore correct.

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