【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day75

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我的答案：DAECB EEECA
正确答案：DEECD AEECA
1.
比较对象，blocks有比人更多的pubs和restaurants，排除ABCE
2.
or两端平行，排除B
排除C，growth不能是根除
排除D，根除的growth不对
排除E 根除reproduction不对

正确解析：
A reproduction后面缺少ofxxx
B inhabiting 和 extermination不平行
C growth不对，改变了句子意思
D 不应该用v-ed而应该用v-ing

3.
them没有指代的对象，排除ABC
排除D had infected时态不对
4.
The host mother 和 their不匹配排除A
Host mothers 和its不匹配，排除E
it的指代有问题，排除B
That of the host's 有问题，排除D
5.
前面是two calliopes后面不能用a hummingbirds不匹配，排除CE
排除D 改变了句子意思，没有体现逻辑关系
排除A their指代有歧义

正确解析：
前面是two calliopes后面不能用a hummingbirds不匹配，排除CE
AB 在the Gulf of Mexico前面没有over不对

6.
The comic and tragic是一个整体那么the satirical 前需要and，排除ABC

正确解析：
这个地方不能用moving 会有修饰歧义
而A之所以正确是因为between the comic and tragic, （and between）the satirical and the intimately personal

7.
Urged Infotech to do A，do B，and do C的平行，排除ABC
排除D for managing不对
8.
排除A，for up until不对
排除B not at all在这里not就可以了
排除C，however不能连接两个句子
排除D ，though it 不对
9.
靠语感选C，说不出来为什么

正确解析：
embellishing不在句首的时候修饰前面的句子，排除AB
排除E them指代有问题
D 动词离主语太远没有C好

10.
Known that A and that B的平行，排除BE
排除C also 重复
排除D them的指代有问题

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1.
A.比较不平行
B.Their people 有歧义
C.不平行
D.They have more pubs than they have people平行比较
E.变成people与blocks比较, 不符合原意
2.
A：看上去还行
B：不平行
C：by noun，应该是by doing sth 要一个方法method
D：错
E：比A好，更符合逻辑。消灭或者抑制reproduction of the insects.
3.
A: them 有歧义接着看
B：过去完成时不好
C：主谓不一致，错personel has
D：过去完成时不好
E：相比于A，把victims说出来，更加清晰。
4.错了
A：主谓不一致
B：that 应该改为those，前面是eggs
C：正确
D：that 改为those，且that of the host’s 冗余
E：its 无指代，应该是their
5.
原句意思，最近，鸟儿被看见飞在parks，center 而不是G地。通常在这个时间点鸟儿应该飞在G地。
A：前面缺少了了个介词。就好比说My flight path is the river 是不对的。我的飞行路线不是河流，而是穿过河流over the river.
B：同理
C：前面是两只鸟
D：正确
E：主谓不一致。
6. 错了
A：正确
B：错误between with 结构
C：不需要完成时
D：moving 暗示的这个sentence is abouth her ability to write while moving.
E: 同理
7.错了
A：B：C：平行不选
D：assemble a team for managing 性质是managing
E：assemble a team to manage 不确定，状态的改变

8.
A：not at all availble 冗余
B：同理
C：句子结构不完整，中间少了noun
D：两个主语错误
E：正确
9 错了
10.
A：两个that 平行；后面也是it

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Day75
1.(341)Certain blocks of Melbourne, most notably the tiny alleyways throughout the central business district, seem to have more pubs and restaurants than there are people.

A. there are
B. their
C. are
D. they have
E. do
错的很低级，基本的平行没有判断正确:
主语seem to have more xxx than they have people

2.(342)Modern pesticides provide a valuable service to farmers by inhibiting the reproduction or exterminating many insects.

A. inhibiting the reproduction or exterminating
B. the extermination or the inhibiting the growth of
C. the extermination of or the inhibition of the growth of
D. exterminated or inhibited reproduction of
E. exterminating or inhibiting the reproduction of

3.(343)HIV virus – the virus that causes AIDS – does not seem to transmit easily from person to person, though in China it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of them.

A. it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of them
B. it has infected the family members and health care personnel who had taken care of them 代词表义是否清晰完整？
C. the virus has infected the family members and health care personnel who have taken care of them
D. the virus had infected the family members and health care personnel who took care of victims
E. it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of victims
重点考察代词是否清晰，用victim，理解很到位

4.(344)In nests across North America, the host mother tries to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host, making that task surprisingly difficult.

(A) the host mother tries to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host, making that task surprisingly difficult

(B) the host mother tries to identify its own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to that of the host, making it surprisingly difficult

(C) host mothers try to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to the host’s, making that task surprisingly difficult

(D) host mothers try to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to that of the host’s, making it surprisingly difficult

(E) host mothers try to identify its own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host’s, making that task surprisingly difficult

5.(345)Recently, two calliopes, hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, their normal flight path at this time of year.

A: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, their normal flight path at this time of year

B: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, the birds’ normal location at this time of year

C: a hummingbird that weighs one-tenth of an ounce, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, the birds’ normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

D: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, the birds’ normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

E: a hummingbird that weighs one-tenth of an ounce, was seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, its normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

6.(346)Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, “The Namesake” attests to Jhumpa Lahiri’s ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal.

(A) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, (and between)the satirical and the intimately personal
用that能够体现出修饰的是best seller这个名词而不是前面的动词ability to
(B) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, with the satirical and the intimately personal

(C) that has moved back and forth between the comic and tragic, and between the satirical and intimately personal

(D) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic, and the satirical and the intimately personal

(E) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic and the satirical and the intimately personal

7.(347)Noting that the company's network is vulnerable to viruses and spyware, the consultant has urged Infotech to upgrade its protection software, institute new policies for exchanging sensitive information, assembling a special team of information technology specialists to manage network security protocols.

A. assembling a special team of information technology specialists to manage
B. assembling a special team of information technology specialists for managing
C. assembling a special team of information technology specialists that manages
D. and assemble a special team of information technology specialists for managing
E. and assemble a special team of information technology specialists to manage

8.(348)The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

A) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

B) The first shoe factory had opened in 1760, but until the industrial revolution of the 19th century, inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers.

C) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, however inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century

D) The first shoe factory, though it opened in 1760, inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

E) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

9.(349)Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, communicated their interpretive understanding of the texts they illustrated.

(A) Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, communicated

(B) Through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks communicated

(C) Through their manuscript illuminations, with which they meticulously embellished elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks communicated

(D) Meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations communicated

(E) Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellished them and communicated

10.(350)Although it was known that inductive action travelled with finite velocity in space, and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance, nearly all the physicists failed to form the only conception of it that was possible.

A. and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance
B. and an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance
C. and also that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely like the square of the distance
D. and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about them practically inversely as the square of the distance
E. and also known that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance

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Day75
1.(341)Certain blocks of Melbourne, most notably the tiny alleyways throughout the central business district, seem to have more pubs and restaurants than there are people.
A错，选D
A. there are
B. their
C. are
D. they have
E. do

2.(342)Modern pesticides provide a valuable service to farmers by inhibiting the reproduction or exterminating many insects.
E
A. inhibiting the reproduction or exterminating
B. the extermination or the inhibiting the growth of
C. the extermination of or the inhibition of the growth of
D. exterminated or inhibited reproduction of
E. exterminating or inhibiting the reproduction of

3.(343)HIV virus – the virus that causes AIDS – does not seem to transmit easily from person to person, though in China it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of them.
C错，选E
A. it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of them
B. it has infected the family members and health care personnel who had taken care of them
C. the virus has infected the family members and health care personnel who have taken care of them【them无指代】
D. the virus had infected the family members and health care personnel who took care of victims
E. it has infected the family members and health care personnel taking care of victims

4.(344)In nests across North America, the host mother tries to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host, making that task surprisingly difficult.
C
(A) the host mother tries to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host, making that task surprisingly difficult

(B) the host mother tries to identify its own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to that of the host, making it surprisingly difficult

(C) host mothers try to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to the host’s, making that task surprisingly difficult

(D) host mothers try to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to that of the host’s, making it surprisingly difficult 【that of 和host‘s redundant， what “it" referring to is unclear】

(E) host mothers try to identify its own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to those of the host’s, making that task surprisingly difficult【those of 和host‘s redundant】

5.(345)Recently, two calliopes, hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, their normal flight path at this time of year.
D
A: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, their normal flight path at this time of year【the birds were seeing flying in several parks instead of (in) the Gulf of Mexico."In the Gulf of Mexico" suggests that the birds were flying underwater, an illogical meaning】

B: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers instead of the Gulf of Mexico, the birds’ normal location at this time of year

C: a hummingbird that weighs one-tenth of an ounce, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, the birds’ normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

D: hummingbirds that weigh one-tenth of an ounce each, were seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, the birds’ normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

E: a hummingbird that weighs one-tenth of an ounce, was seen flying in several northeastern parks and conservancy centers; at this time of year, its normal flight path is over the Gulf of Mexico

6.(346)Though perhaps less visceral and emotionally satisfying than her previous novels, “The Namesake” attests to Jhumpa Lahiri’s ability to write a best seller that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal.
E错，选A
(A) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, the satirical and the intimately personal

(B) that moves back and forth between the comic and tragic, with the satirical and the intimately personal

(C) that has moved back and forth between the comic and tragic, and between the satirical and intimately personal

(D) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic, and the satirical and the intimately personal

(E) moving back and forth between the comic and tragic and the satirical and the intimately personal

7.(347)Noting that the company's network is vulnerable to viruses and spyware, the consultant has urged Infotech to upgrade its protection software, institute new policies for exchanging sensitive information, assembling a special team of information technology specialists to manage network security protocols.
D错，选E
A. assembling a special team of information technology specialists to manage
B. assembling a special team of information technology specialists for managing
C. assembling a special team of information technology specialists that manages
D. and assemble a special team of information technology specialists for managing 【 "assemble for managing" is not a proper construction since for managing is not an infinitive form. 】
E. and assemble a special team of information technology specialists to manage

8.(348)The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.
E
A) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers for up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.
【'at all' is unnecessary, as 'not available' succinctly states that there was no availability) and 'up until' ('until', on its own, serves the same purpose】
B) The first shoe factory had opened in 1760, but until the industrial revolution of the 19th century, inexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers.

C) The first shoe factory opened in 1760,howeverinexpensive shoes were not at all available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century

D) The first shoe factory, though itopened in 1760, inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers up until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

E) The first shoe factory opened in 1760, but inexpensive shoes were not available to consumers until the industrial revolution of the 19th century.

9.(349)Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, communicated their interpretive understanding of the texts they illustrated.
E错，选C
(A) Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, communicated

(B) Through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks communicated

(C) Through their manuscript illuminations, with which they meticulously embellished elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks communicated

(D) Meticulously embellishing the elaborate calligraphy, medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations communicated

(E) Medieval monks, through their manuscript illuminations, meticulously embellished them and communicated

10.(350)Although it was known that inductive action travelled with finite velocity in space, and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance, nearly all the physicists failed to form the only conception of it that was possible.
B错，选A
A. and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance
B. and an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance 【The GMAT often uses the parallel construction: VERB +
“THAT”….and THAT 】
C. and also that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely like the square of the distance
D. and that an electro-magnet would affect the space about them practically inversely as the square of the distance
E. and also known that an electro-magnet would affect the space about it practically inversely as the square of the distance

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