【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day68

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1.(271)Whales make clicking sounds that are strange to human ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales, the echoes tell it that there’s a fish to the left, another whale a hundred yards ahead, or a squid in the distance.

A. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales, the echoes
B. ears, when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whale; the echoes
C. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whale; the echoes
D. ears, when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales; the echoes
E. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around a whale, the echoes

E
鲸鱼的声音对人耳来说很奇怪，但是当这些声音被周围东西反弹以后，回声会告诉鲸鱼周围有东西
我理解下来这里可以有but，在ACE里选择
里面没有独立的句子所以E

2.(272)Although many of the elderly residents in the nursing home are quite wealthy, they do not seem to make much use of it, with some of them rarely spending any money beyond their monthly fees at the facility.

A. make much use of it, with some of them
B. make much use of it, as some of them
C. be making much use of it, with some
D. make much use of their wealth, with some of them
E. be making much use of their wealth, as some

D
it指代没有their wealth明确，it可以指代wealth或者前面所有

3.(273)The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balances the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.

A) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balances the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.

B) The rebel group who has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balances the interests of the main players; Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

C) The rebel group who has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balance the interests of the main players, Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

D) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balance the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support; Turkey manages the border and urges caution; and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

E) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balance the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support and Turkey manages the border and urges caution; the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.

D
AEhas和say不一致
C用逗号连接两句句子
B decisions balances不对


4.(274)The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

A. The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

B. The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares has risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to express belief that the company will make more efficient tractors and that people will flock to buy.

C. The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares has risen nearly 200 percent this year because more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

D. The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to express belief that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

E.The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year in that more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors and people will flock to buy.

B
应该是股票的价值上升200%，在AB中间选
A value对应have 主谓不一致

5.(275)The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry many business analysts, who think that the company has lost focus under the new CEO’s leadership.

(A) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(B) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation has developed over the past year and that has recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(C) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that has recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(D) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation has developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worries
(E) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worries

D
第一个是Corporation has developed
BD里面选择
and后面的that指代的是products，用have

6.(276)The success of Khan Academy proves that learning online is much more effective online and students’ preference is to learn at their own pace.

A. learning online is much more effective online and students' preference is
B. learning online is much more effective as students prefer
C. to learn online is much more effective since students preferring
D. online learning is more effective with students’ preference
E. learning online is much more effective and that students prefer

B
有比较级不能用and连接



7.(277)At issue in the proceeding is whether the gaming firm can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, using special identification and location software, among other tools.

(A) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, using special identification and location software, among other tools.

(B) can, with the use of special identification and location software, verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, among other tools.

(C) can, with the use of special identification and location software, among other tools, verify that the site’s users are over 21 and a legal gambling state or country.

(D) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and a legal gambling state or country, with the use of special identification and location software, among other tools.

(E) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, among other tools, using special identification and location software.

A
平行 user over21 and in a...排除CD
但是不知道是A还是B


8.(278)An auteur whose movies define the genre, Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave what Sergio Leone's The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly is to the spaghetti western.

(A) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave what
(B) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave like
(C) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave just as
(D) Jean-Luc Godard directed films that are to the French New Wave similar to
(E) Jean-Luc Godard directed films that are to the French New Wave what

A
JD的films就像SL的，电影之间的比较，排除DE
a is to B is what c is to..


9.(279)The country’s Commerce secretary says that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year.

(A) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year

(B) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion last year

(C) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared with about $20 billion last year

(D) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared with about $20 billion reached in last year

(E) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion reached last year

A
动词后面不能直接加完整的句子，排除CDE

10.(280)There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E
so和enough排除，Bd排除
so as to是为了、以至于 没有so that好，排除A
are 不能和 it一起，排除C

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Day68
1.(271)Whales make clicking sounds that are strange to human ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales, the echoes tell it that there’s a fish to the left, another whale a hundred yards ahead, or a squid in the distance.
E
A. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales, the echoes
B. ears, when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whale; the echoes
C. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whale; the echoes
D. ears, when those clicks ricochet off objects around the whales; the echoes
E. ears, but when those clicks ricochet off objects around a whale, the echoes

2.(272)Although many of the elderly residents in the nursing home are quite wealthy, they do not seem to make much use of it, with some of them rarely spending any money beyond their monthly fees at the facility.
A错，选D
A. make much use of it, with some of them
B. make much use of it, as some of them
C. be making much use of it, with some
D. make much use of their wealth, with some of them
E. be making much use of their wealth, as some

3.(273)The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balances the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.
D
A) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balances the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.

B) The rebel group who has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balances the interests of the main players; Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

C) The rebel group who has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balance the interests of the main players, Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support, Turkey manages the border and urges caution, and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

D) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters says its decisions balance the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support; Turkey manages the border and urges caution; and the United States supervises, maintaining a veto on weapon shipments.

E) The rebel group that has visited the operations headquarters say its decisions balance the interests of the main players: Egypt provides funding and pushes for greater rebel support and Turkey manages the border and urges caution; the United States supervises and maintains a veto on weapon shipments.

4.(274)The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.
D
A. The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

B. The value of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares has risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to express belief that the company will make more efficient tractors and that people will flock to buy.

C. The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares has risen nearly 200 percent this year because more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

D. The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investors have started to express belief that the company will make more efficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

E.The farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year in that more investors have started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors and people will flock to buy.

5.(275)The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry many business analysts, who think that the company has lost focus under the new CEO’s leadership.
B错，选D
(A) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(B) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation has developed over the past year and that has recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(C) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that has recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worry
(D) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation has developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worries
(E) The quality of the new products that ACME Corporation have developed over the past year and that have recently arrived on retailers’ shelves worries

6.(276)The success of Khan Academy proves that learning online is much more effective online and students’ preference is to learn at their own pace.
B错，选E
A. learning online is much more effective online and students' preference is
B. learning online is much more effective as students prefer
C. to learn online is much more effective since students preferring
D. online learning is more effective with students’ preference
E. learning online is much more effective and that students prefer

7.(277)At issue in the proceeding is whether the gaming firm can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, using special identification and location software, among other tools.
A
(A) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, using special identification and location software, among other tools.

(B) can, with the use of special identification and location software, verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, among other tools.

(C) can, with the use of special identification and location software, among other tools, verify that the site’s users are over 21 and a legal gambling state or country.

(D) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and a legal gambling state or country, with the use of special identification and location software, among other tools.

(E) can verify that the site’s users are over 21 and in a legal gambling state or country, among other tools, using special identification and location software.

8.(278)An auteur whose movies define the genre, Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave what Sergio Leone's The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly is to the spaghetti western.
B错，选E
(A) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave what
(B) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave like
(C) Jean-Luc Godard's films are to the French New Wave just as
(D) Jean-Luc Godard directed films that are to the French New Wave similar to
(E) Jean-Luc Godard directed films that are to the French New Wave what

9.(279)The country’s Commerce secretary says that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year.
B错，选C
(A) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year

(B) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion last year

(C) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared with about $20 billion last year

(D) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared with about $20 billion reached in last year

(E) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion reached last year

10.(280)There are a few acts of nature, such as a total solar eclipse or a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself.
E错，选A
A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself

B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience themselves

C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue of patience itself

D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that are so rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

E) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

F_Hillary

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DonkeyG

错误的：
4.(274)The value ofthe farming equipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent thisyear as more investors have started to believe that the company will make moreefficient tractors that people will flock to buy.

A. The value of the farming equipmentmanufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as more investorshave started to believe that the company will make more efficient tractors thatpeople will flock to buy.
B. Thevalue of the farming equipment manufacturer’s shares has risen nearly 200percent this year as more investors have started to express belief that thecompany will make more efficient tractors and that people will flock to buy.
C. The farming equipment manufacturer’s shareshas risen nearly 200 percent this year because more investors have started tobelieve that the company will make more efficient tractors that people willflock to buy.
D. The farmingequipment manufacturer’s shares have risen nearly 200 percent this year as moreinvestors have started to express belief that the company will make moreefficient tractors that people will flock to buy.
E.The farming equipment manufacturer’s shareshave risen nearly 200 percent this year in that more investors have started tobelieve that the company will make more efficient tractors and people willflock to buy.

D错选B，我原本判断的是价值也就是value增长，而不是shares增长，因为体现不出来是share的数量上增长还是价值增长，结果答案说是后面两个应该是从属关系，而非并列关系。。。反正纠结了

看了一位UU写的：股票价格上涨，一般习惯性的说法是The shares rise而非the value

6.(276)The success of Khan Academy proves that learning online is much more effective online andstudents’ preference is to learn at their own pace.

A. learning online is much more effective onlineand students' preference is
B. learning online is much more effective as students prefer
C. to learn online is much more effective sincestudents preferring
D. online learning is more effective withstudents’ preference
E. learning online is much more effective and that studentsprefer

E错选B， 原本考虑的:不应该是因果关系吗？所以选B啊。。我无法理解intend meaning是什么鬼。。怎么就一定能确定这俩是平行关系。。

9.(279)The country’s Commerce secretary says that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billiondollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year.

(A) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40 billiondollars in 2013, compared to about $20 billion in last year
(B) that spending on fuel subsidies could reach$40 billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion last year
(C) spendingon fuel subsidies could reach $40 billion dollars in 2013, compared with about$20 billion last year
(D) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40billion dollars in 2013, compared with about $20 billion reached in last year
(E) spending on fuel subsidies could reach $40billion dollars in 2013, and that is compared to about $20 billion reached lastyear

C错选A，you cannot say “$20 billion inlast year”

10.(280)There are a few acts of nature, such as atotal solar eclipse or a dormantvolcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic as to seem like metaphorsfor the virtue of patience itself.

A) a dormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and sodramatic as to seem like metaphors for the virtue of patience itself
B) an explosion of a dormant volcano, that areso rare and dramatic enough that they seem like metaphors for the virtue of patiencethemselves
C) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that areso rare and so dramatic that it seems like a metaphor for the virtue ofpatience itself
D) the explosion of a dormant volcano, that areso rare and dramatic enough as to seem like a metaphor for the virtue ofpatience themselves
E) adormant volcano exploding, that are so rare and so dramatic that they seem tobe a metaphor for the virtue of patience themselves

A错选E，没看到E中的最后是themselves。。。

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1. E：后面的it提示了单数的whale
2. D：如果用it代词就会指代不清
3. E：因为这个点很隐蔽，所以要注意看……比如D和E乍一眼看以为是分号的并列问题，实际上是says和say的区别
4. D：在这个例子中，（就像他们经常做的那样），测试者试图让人们固定在一个非常困难和不重要的选择上，而一个更大的问题却隐藏在句子的最后。在（B）中，该句不恰当地指出，a "belief that the company will start to make more efficient tractors AND that people will flock to buy"，两个 "that"字句都是修饰信念的，而第二个句子应该是修饰拖拉机的。问题是，说有一个单独的信念，即人们会蜂拥而至购买，是没有意义的：蜂拥而至购买什么？
5. D
6. E
7. A
8. E：A's are to B what X is to Y
9. C：宾语从句的that竟然是可以省略的，我真的震撼到了
这道题就两个考点：that指代问题；in last year不能有in
10. (E)直到最后都是正确的（包含人们喜欢的 "so…that "的结构，而不是 "so as to"），其中也包含 "themselves"的错误。 说 "that they (the acts of nature) seem to be a metaphor…themselves"是没有意义的。 正确 - they seem to be a metaphor for the virtue of patience ITSELF"它们似乎是对耐心这一美德本身的一种隐喻" 。很多人不选（A），因为 "so…as to"这个不寻常的成语，但这正是你没有资格做出的决定点 在这个例子中，"so…as to"是完全正确的，只有（A）具有所有其他要素的正确结构。

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Day 68 EDDBD EAEAB
1.
A：the echoes tells it that, it无指代
B；感觉前面半分号，后面有it不太好
C：同理
D：同理
E：正确
2.
A：it只能指代home，不符合题意；them也只能指代residents
B：同理
C：be making 错误；同A
D：正确。
3.
A：decisions balances 主谓不一致
B：同理
C：后面句子结构不完整
D：合适
E：后面句子没有D平行
4.
A：主谓不一致，主语 the value.
B:  the investors believe that people will flock to buy???
C: 主谓不一致
D：正确: the people will flock to buy tractors 比B的更加好
E：同理
5.       
主谓一致/平行
6.
A：online 冗余了
B：
C：to 错误
D：online learning is effective to learn？？？ 有歧义
E：平行正确
7.
A：using 修饰verify 的动作，among other tools 修饰softwares, 可以
B：谁使用？？不够A清晰；among tools 修饰错误
C：同理；并且uses are a state？？ 错误
D：同理
E：同理
8.
A are to B what X is to Y
9.
A: 20 billion in last year 错误
B： and that 句子不完整，应该连在一起
C：正确
D：同理
E：同理
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