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发表于 2022-11-29 14:53:50 | 只看该作者
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1.
句子结构;定语从句
To many critics, it seems strange for T to be working on...
A  correct.
B  that T be working on...错,that从句中缺谓语
C  that从句的结构完整,但错误使用that指代artist,定语从句指代人只能用who
D  to be working错误和to the public,to venues并列,导致句子结构变成it seems strange for T
E  that T be working错
2.
平行;redundancy
Traders make more money than peers not because... but because...
A  the reason is because重复;not...but不平行
B  correct. Not... but平行;because作为原因状语正确
C  参考A
D  because of noun和because+clause的平行不如B
E  the reason is that they are not more skilled错
3.
同位语;句意;be的用法
The addition is the latest adjustment.
A  is a rare critic是主系表的结构,而is betting是主谓的结构,所以两者不可以共用一个be动词
B  Mr.Steven cannot be an adjustment.
C  a rare critic只能修饰人,不能修饰addition
D  correct.
E  同B
4.
代词指代;句意;时态
A  correct. it指代第一个Canada(表示过去的)
B  it无指代
C  强调句很奇怪
D  what was的结构冗余
E  过去完成时错误
5.
ABCD不如E选项将it was补充出来的比较清晰
6.
平行;修饰
7.
平行
AI is used to establish..., to identify..., to predict..., to determine..., and more.
8.
平行;时态
Ending a stalemate, the minister, EL formed a government uniting...-- and including... -- to guide Italy out of stagnation.
A  根据government的定语从句使用一般过去时,暗示了整个句子发生在过去,所以一般现在时错误
B  correct. And including和前面的uniting平行,修饰government;时态正确
C  and that included修饰government,暗示has formed时态错误,且that included和前面现在分词修饰不平行
D  and including没有平行对象
E  unite不是form a government的目的,而是government united those people. And includes只能平行作为EL的谓语,EL并不能包括女性和第一个非白人首相。
9.
平行
10.
主谓一致;句意
Transfers are almost $100 billion, according to GBO, or roughly the equivalent of budgets.
AB 主语是transfers,主谓不一致
C  correct. According to正确修饰transfers are $100 billion
D  according to修饰错误
E  同D;且同位语冗余
24#
发表于 2022-11-29 16:06:35 | 只看该作者
Day 62 CBCDE EDEDC 错4个
1.正确答案为A
A:合适:it’s for sb to do sth
B: that 后面加句子,而这里并没有,句子结构不完整
C:同理,这样子就是 it’s for sb, and to 句子结构错误,首先后面it 指代不了东西,后面,应该要在后面加to do, to do sth is ... for sb,并且and 后面并列句不是完整的句子、
D:同理
E:同理
2.
A:没有平行,并且avoid the reason is that possible
B:最合适,平行
C : the reason for,the reason用于... ??? 错误,并且没有平行
D:无平行
E:无平行
3,正确选项D
1.is a rare critic and is betting 才平行
2.Mr. S不是最新的adjustment
3.A rare critic of the company 修饰的是Mr.S
4.正确
5.同理/ With his addition???修饰的是下面的句子??
4.正确选项A
A:正确:在欧洲人的思想中,before Canada......
B:there 指代的是什么,那里有Canada????
C:后面错了,a cold and inhospital place 修饰的是wildness 而不是Canada
D: Canada was something that was wildness, Candada 是一个国家,而不是Wildness
E:同理
5.
E:比较问题,明显选E,比较不同时态的,要把时态搞出来
6.
A:employing 修饰的是他成为这个最大employer这件事,错误
B:which修饰的World war 22,并且他是个时间,错误
C:前面看上去正确,但是后面有“,and in which’, 而如果选C的话which 就指代不了,错误
D:同理A
E:正确:which修饰的是the Department of Defense
7.
D,to do, to do, and more.
8:
A: 过去完成时错误/ united 和 included 不太好,并且最后Europe’s economy 修饰错误,只能说意大利的经济是欧洲第三大经济,或者说意大利,有着欧洲第三大经济。而这里相当于意思是 意大利是经济,错误
B:正确uniting 修饰government 表达的是一种状态 这个government 是一个团结 liberals的government ,而不是goverment 去团结
C:时态错误/ and that include 没有平行
D:平行
E: 也是uniting 是表达政府的一种状态,而不是to do sth
The governemnt that united ....
那个政府,去做团结这件事的政府
The government unting
那个政府,它是团结的政府,一种状态
9.
明显的平行。
10.
A: 主谓不一致
B:同理
        C:正确,budget的钱数,accoring to,是就是说100bilion 是根据政府统计的
D:两个budget 方案相同??? 并且还有according to的位置修饰问题,修饰的是整一个句子。说相同这件事是根据政府官员的证明的,逻辑没那么好
E:同理
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发表于 2022-11-29 19:46:27 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2022-11-30 00:58:39 | 只看该作者
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29#
发表于 2022-11-30 01:17:22 | 只看该作者
Day 62
1. 错选C grammatical construction
strange for sb.感觉读起来有点奇怪,当时直接排掉了AD(这里是错误的!strange for 和strange that的表达都是正确的区别在于strange that是从句结构需要整个clause,而strange for只需要一个phrase,不需要动词)
B和E的that+to be working on/be working on是不正确的,排除
C的who is 72和the legendary print不平行一个是从句一个是noun phrase结构不优
D后半句用and连接直接sentence fragmen 排除
因此应该选A

2. B 考点比较 平行
A not that but because结构不平行
B not because but because结构完美语义通顺
C is that not because结构不优
D because of, not because结构不平行
E but后面要有完整clause 不正确

3. D 考点 grammatical construction 平行
C和E的逻辑主语有误 Mr. Stevens不能是latests adjustment, addition也不是rare critic
A的 is a rare critic of the company 和betting its stock不平行
B的 is和has been added也不正确
因此应该选择D

4. 错选E 考点rhetorical construction 时态 修饰
这道题明显就是自己瞎想,本来靠语感能做出来的题非得瞎想
B there was Canada接上it指代不清 (没有指代不清的问题!而是before there is 没有修饰in the minds of many Europeans, 而是修饰了后面的it was a vast wilderness)
C 同B
D 非常尴尬语义没有任何逻辑
E 尴尬而且时态有误


5. 错选D 考点比较
排除掉比较对象错误的A/B/C(the weight vs. fifty years ago)
D: fifteen percent more..than这个比较形式是错误的

6. E 考点平行 rhetorical constructions
看未划线部分indirectly supported 所以最好是directly employed,排掉A/D的employing
C拿nation's largest employer和employed放一起平行明显是错误的
B和E中during WWII的placement比较重要,放在句尾有歧义,因此应该选E


7. D 考点平行
这个比较简单了,平行时to...to..只有D符合


8. B 考点rhetorical constructions 时态
A的has formed是开始了但没有结束的意思,用在这里是错误的 排除
C had been frightening被frigntened不对?(这里不算错误),错误点在formed a government that include 主谓不一致绝对错误,另外has formed同A也是绝对错误
E formed to unite and to guide这里语义改变了 另外用破折号补充includes后面的部分并不需要and
因此B是正确的


9. 错选B 考点平行 rhetorical constructions
排掉平行间不正确的: preserve balance, keep distance 和compromise应该是一个平行层次上的
因此先排掉AC
E这里keeping compromising修饰的是is an underappreciated从句,后面接provides没有and连接词也是错的
B和D之间, B都是doing形式,但后面的providing可以修饰keeping/compromising也可以修饰technique,有歧义错误


10. 错选D 考点 主谓一致 修饰
transfers主语复数形式排掉AB
D/E之间修饰语accordig to the Government Budget Office放在了are后面,听起来像是Government Budget Office花了很多时间证明他们是差不多数额的,但原句的意思明显是两个元素同等重要,都是修饰语(其实就是用or表平行,但用插入语的话就变成了次级重点)




因此这里应该选C
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发表于 2022-11-30 06:14:08 | 只看该作者
Day62 (错了1 & 2 & 4 & 7 & 10)
1.(211)To many critics, it seems strange for Ms. Tramonivic, 72, the legendary print and visual artist who almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public and to large venues, to be working on a small off-Broadway dance project.

A) for Ms. Tramonivic, 72, the legendary print and visual artist who almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public and to large venues, to be working on a small off-Broadway dance project.

B) that Ms. Tramonivic, 72, the legendary print and visual artist who almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public and large venues, be working on a small off Broadway-dance project.

C) that Ms. Tramonivic, who is 72 and the legendary print and visual artist that almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public and large venues, is working on a small off-Broadway dance project.

D) for Ms. Tramonivic, 72, the legendary print and visual artist who almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public, to large venues, and to be working on a small off Broadway dance project.

E) that Ms. Tramonivic, who is 72 and the legendary print and visual artist who almost singlehandedly brought performance art to the general public and large venues, to be working on a small off-Broadway dance project.
答案:C
句子完整性,缺谓语,排除A B D E

2.(212)According to Nassim Taleb, the reason that most successful Wall Street traders make more money than their peers is not that they are more skilled but because they are lucky.

A. the reason that most successful Wall Street traders make more money than their peers is not that they are more skilled but because they are lucky.

B. most successful Wall Street traders make more money than their peers not because they are more skilled, but because they are lucky.

C. the reason for most successful Wall Street traders making more money than their peers is that they are lucky and not because they are more skilled.

D. most successful Wall Street traders make more money than their peers because of their luck, not because they are more skilled.

E. the reason why most successful Wall Street traders make more money than their peers is that they are not more skilled but lucky.
答案:E
Is not that…but because…不平行,排除A;缺谓语,排除B;is that they are lucky and not because 不对称,排除C;缺谓语,排除D

3.(213)The addition of Mr. Stevens, who is a rare critic of the company and betting its stock will fall, is the latest adjustment to a yearly convention that is normally a complete affirmation of the company’s board and its policies.

A. The addition of Mr. Stevens, who is a rare critic of the company and betting its stock will fall, is the latest adjustment

B. Betting its stock will fall, Mr. Stevens, who is a rare critic of the company and has been added, is the latest adjustment

C. A rare critic of the company, the addition of Mr. Stevens, who is betting the stock will fall, is the latest adjustment

D. The addition of Mr. Stevens, who is a rare critic of the company and is betting its stock will fall, is the latest adjustment

E. With his addition, Mr. Stevens, a rare critic of the company who is betting its stock will fall, is the latest adjustment

4.(214)In the minds of many Europeans, before Canada was Canada, it was a vast wilderness, a cold and inhospitable place that nonetheless was the ancestral home of many Inuit tribes.

(A) before Canada was Canada, it was a vast wilderness
(B) before there was Canada, it was a vast wilderness
(C) it was a vast wilderness that was Canada
(D) Canada was what was a vast wilderness
(E) Canada was what had been known as a vast wilderness
答案:E
In the minds of many Europeans给出主语Canada,排除A B C
Was what was句子糅杂,排除D

5.(215)The weight of the average American male today is roughly fifteen percent greater than fifty years ago.

A. The weight of the average American male today is roughly fifteen percent greater than fifty years ago.

B. The weight of the average American male is roughly fifteen percent greater today than fifty years ago.

C. Today, the weight of the average American male is roughly fifteen percent greater than fifty years ago.

D. The average American male weighs roughly fifteen percent more today than fifty years ago.

E. The weight of the average American male today is roughly fifteen percent greater than it was fifty years ago.

6.(216)During World War II the Department of Defense was the nation's largest employer, directly employing over 16 million soldiers who served in combat and thousands more support staffers who served the war effort domestically, and which indirectly supported several million additional jobs through its extensive use of the manufacturing and trasportation industries.

(A) During World War II the Department of Defense was the nation's largest employer, directly employing

(B) The Department of Defense was the nation's largest employer during World War II, which directly employed

(C) During World War II the Department of Defense was the nation's largest employer and employed

(D) The nation's largest employer during World War II was the Department of Defense was, directly employing

(E) During World War II the nation's largest employer was the Department of Defense, which directly employed
答案:E
无法与and which平行,排除A;Which修饰World War II, 排除B;and改变句子逻辑关系,排除C;the Department of Defense was,was多余,排除D

7.(217)There are new concerns being raised about the use of supercomputers in health care, where artificial intelligence is used to establish which skin lesions are cancerous, to identify early-stage cancer in blood, predict heart disease, determine what compounds could help extend healthy life spans, and more.

(A) predict heart disease, determine what compounds could help extend healthy life spans, and more

(B) to predict heart disease, determining what compounds could help extend healthy life spans

(C) to predict heart disease, and to determine what compounds could help extend healthy life spans, and more

(D) to predict heart disease, to determine what compounds could help extend healthy life spans, and more

(E) predict heart disease, determine what compounds could help extend healthy life spans
答案:C
To establish, to identify and to predict平行,and more与life spans平行,选C

8.(218)Ending a contentious political stalemate that frightened global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, has finally formed a rare coalition government that united liberals and conservatives—and included a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite ministers—to guide Italy, Europe’s third-largest economy, out of stagnation.

(A) frightened global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, has finally formed a rare coalition government that united liberals and conservatives—and included a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite ministers—to guide Italy, Europe’s

(B) had frightened global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, finally formed a rare coalition government uniting liberals and conservatives—and including a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite minister—to guide Italy, with Europe’s

(C) had been frightening global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, has finally formed a rare coalition government uniting liberals and conservatives—and that include a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite minister —to guide Italy, which has Europe’s

(D) had frightened global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, finally formed a rare coalition government that united liberals and conservatives—and including a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite minister—to guide Italy, which has Europe’s

(E) frightened global business leaders, the new Italian Prime Minister, Enrico Letta, finally formed a rare coalition government to unite liberals and conservatives—and includes a record number of women and Italy’s first nonwhite minister—and to guide Italy, with Europe’s
答案:B
Has finally formed发生在frightened之前,错误,排除A;and that include与uniting不平行,排除C;and including与that united不平行,排除D;and includes与formed不平行,排除E

9.(219)The jab, a boxing technique, although not as impressive as a powerful left-hook, is an underappreciated technique that preserves balance and high mobility, keeping the opponent at a distance, and compromises the other fighter's guard, providing an opportunity for a more powerful strike.

A. keeping the opponent at a distance, and compromises the other fighter's guard, providing
B. keeping the opponent at a distance, and compromising the other fighter's guard, providing
C. keeps the opponent at a distance, and compromising the other fighter's guard, providing
D. keeps the opponent at a distance, and compromises the other fighter's guard, providing
E. keeping the opponent at a distance, and compromising the other fighter's guard, provides

答案:D
Preserves, keeps and compromises平行,providing表示结果,选择D

10.(220)The total remittance transfers sent across the world from the top three industrial nations in recent years is almost $100 billion annually, according to the Government Budget Office, or roughly the equivalent of those three countries’ foreign assistance budget.

(A) years is almost $100 billion annually, according to the Government Budget Office, or roughly the equivalent of those three countries’ foreign assistance budgets.

(B) years is almost $100 billion annually, according to the Government Budget Office, roughly the equivalent of those three countries’ foreign assistance budgets.

(C) years are almost $100 billion annually, according to the Government Budget Office, or roughly the equivalent of those three countries’ foreign assistance budgets.

(D) years – almost $100 billion annually – are, according to the Government Budget Office, roughly the equivalent of those three countries’ foreign assistance budgets.

(E) years, an amount that is almost $100 billion annually, are, according to the Government Budge Office, roughly the equivalent of the foreign assistance budgets of those three countries.
答案:E
主语transfers为复数,排除A B; or前后不平行,排除C;almost $100 billion annually解释years,逻辑错误,排除D
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