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1A 2A 用has不用have,during which不佳,where不合适。3B,比较前后矛盾不用被动,A有比较歧义,E啰嗦没用。4C,they their歧义,out of Office在b中修饰歧义。5A,data复数,应该是在做这个事情中用进行时。单复数。6E,a无谓语,b单复数,c which不佳,d两个谓语。7D,平行。8B,动词》动名词,能用determine不用determination,all对应most。9C,单复数,系统比不用that of。10D,单复数,as many as固定搭配,比较的是appropriations的数量而不是和four combine比
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发表于 2022-11-22 14:13:21 | 只看该作者
1A  开头修饰的不是resume排B;C并列有问题,musical不是修饰人;DE双谓语
x2E A 比较结构需要has 排BCD,AE 选错,where只能修饰具体地点。当时纠结半天公共交通系统怎么能involving 人进去,感觉只能involving交通工具....
3B as much as秒排,marketing accounts… research accounts…. Does指代accounts
4C 指代问题,就一个没they/their
x5E 看见being秒排了AB,CDE中选的E虽然当时觉得 in consideration for的确有点奇怪;current暗指现在时这个很关键,记下了
6E 找准谓语raise,以及后面究竟什么on the rise - behavior
x7E warming, rising, melting, bleaching 感觉应该是四个gerund并列,但是rise有名词形式这点忽视了;另外melting 和bleaching 少of
8B 需要最高级
9C 纠结了一会,语义选的C,no element is more in need of repair … than the penal system (is in need of repair) that没有指代的对象
10D 主谓单数House;对比句意理解 as many appropriations for national parks as (appropriations) have been made during the last four administrations combined.
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发表于 2022-11-22 15:50:46 | 只看该作者
Day56
1.(151)An actor and singer for most of his career, Gene Kellyexpanded his storied Hollywood resume later in life by directing Singing in theRain, arguably the greatest musical of all time.

A. An actor and singer for most of his career, Gene Kellyexpanded his storied Hollywood resume later in life by directing Singing in theRain, arguably
B. An actor and singer for most of his career,Gene Kelly’s storied Hollywood resume was expanded later in life by directingSinging in the Rain, arguably

C. An actor and singer for most of his careerwas Gene Kelly, who expanded his storied Hollywood resume later in life bydirecting Singing in the Rain and was arguably
D. Gene Kelly was an actor and singer for mostof his career, expanded his storied Hollywood resume later in life by directingSinging in the Rain, arguably
E. Gene Kelly was an actor and singer for mostof his career, expanded his storied Hollywood resume later in life by directingSinging in the Rain, which was arguably
A
2.(152)The averagefare for big city public transportation involvingmillions of people moving to and from their workplaces every weekday hasgenerally increased more slowly than inflation has.

A. transportation involving millions of people moving to andfrom their workplaces every weekday has generally increased more slowly thaninflation has.
B. transportation involving millions of peoplemoving to and from their workplaces every weekday have generally increased moreslowly than inflation.
C. transportation, during which millions ofpeople moving to and from their workplaces every weekday, has generallyincreased more slowly than inflation.
D. transportation, where millions of people aremoved to and from their workplaces every weekday, have generally increased moreslowly than inflation.
E. transportation, where millions of people aremoved to and from their workplaces every weekday, has generally increased moreslowly than has inflation.
A
3.(153)Whilemarket-driven competition encourages pharmaceutical companies to actively seekinnovative new drugs, market analysts note that marketing accounts for twiceas much of the industry budget as research.

A) marketingaccounts for twice as much of the industry budget as research
B) marketing accounts for twice as much of the industrybudget as does research
C) the industrybudget is accounted for twice as much by marketing than research
D) the industrybudget is accounted for twice as much by marketing than by research
E) marketing newdrugs is twice as expensive compared to research.
B
4.(154)The companymanual specifically outlines rules foremployees about contacting managers while they are out of the office onvacation or for personal reasons.

(A) for employeesabout contacting managers while they are out of the office on vacation or forpersonal reasons
(B) for employeesabout contacting their managers out of the office on vacation or for personalreasons
(C) for employees about contacting managers who are out ofthe office on vacation or for personal reasons
(D) for employeesabout contacting managers who are out of their office on vacation or forpersonal reasons
(E) for employeesabout contacting managers if they are out of their office on vacation or forpersonal reasons
C
5.(155)The data being collected in the current geological survey areproviding a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new dam project,but their greatest importance might lie inhow they influence the upcoming decision by those same engineers on whether toretrofit 75 bridges in the survey zone.

(A) The data being collected in the current geological surveyare providing a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new damproject, but their greatest importance
(B) The data being collected in the currentgeological survey provide a strong warning for engineers as they consider thenew dam project, but its greatest importance
(C) Thedata collected in the current geological survey is providing a strong warningfor engineers as they consider the new dam project, but their greatestimportance
(D) The data collected in the current geologicalsurvey provides a strong warning for engineers in consideration of the new damproject, but its greatest importance
(E) The data collected in the current geologicalsurvey provide a strong warning for engineers in consideration for the new damproject, but the greatest importance

A错选C,第一次知道data是复数要用are!我一直以为是单数

6.(156)Threefederal lawsuits that charge a prominentinvestment firm with releasing fraudulent financial reports to promote sales ofits mutual funds and raising disturbing questions about how to control fraudulentbehavior in the financial services industry, behavior that appears to be on therise.

(A) that charge aprominent investment firm with releasing fraudulent financial reports topromote sales of its mutual funds and raising disturbing questions about how tocontrol fraudulent behavior in the financial services industry, behavior thatappears to be on the rise
(B) charging a prominent investment firm withreleasing fraudulent financial reports and promoting sales of its mutual fundsraises disturbing questions about how to control fraudulent behavior in thefinancial services industry that appears to be on the rise

(C) that charge a prominent investment firm withreleasing fraudulent financial reports to promote sales of its mutual fundsraises disturbing questions about how to control fraudulent behavior in thefinancial services industry, which appears to be on the rise
(D) charge a prominent investment firm withreleasing fraudulent financial reports to promote sales of its mutual fundsraise disturbing questions about how to control fraudulent behavior in thefinancial services industry that appears to be on the rise
(E)charging a prominent investment firm with releasing fraudulent financialreports to promote sales of its mutual funds raise disturbing questions abouthow to control fraudulent behavior in the financial services industry, behaviorthat appears to be on the rise
E
7.(157)Some of theearly warning signs of climate change are the warming of ocean waters and a corresponding rise in sea levels, melting glaciers, and thebleaching of coral reefs.

A. a correspondingrise in sea levels, melting glaciers, and the bleaching of
B. rising sealevels, melting glaciers, and the bleaching of
C. a correspondencein the rise of sea levels, melted glaciers, and bleached
D. a corresponding rise in sea levels, the melting ofglaciers, and the bleaching of
E. correspondingrising sea levels, melting glaciers, and bleaching
D
8.(158)Of all theevents leading to the formation of the Earth, the catalyst for the infinitemass of matter that caused the Big Bang ismaybe the more difficult for determination.

(A) is maybe themore difficult for determination
(B) is probably the most difficult to determine
(C) is maybe themost difficult for determination
(D) is probably themore difficult to determine
(E) is, it may be,the determination that is most difficult
B
9.(159)It ispossible that no element of the many that make up our justice system are more in need of repair than the penal system, though a few states have enacted remedialchanges that show promise.

(A) are more inneed of repair than the
(B) is in need of repair more than is that of the
(C) is more in need of repair than the
(D) are more inneed of repair than are that of
(E) has been morein need of repair than has that of the

C错选b,没仔细看意思,要知道这里说的是整个司法系统中没有比刑法更需要修补的了,所以不需要that of,不然反而会很奇怪。

10.(160)In anunprecedented display of bipartisanship, the House of Representatives are expected to unanimously approve a bill that willresult in as many appropriations for national parks as have been made duringthe last four administra- tions combined.

(A) are expected tounanimously approve a bill that will result in as many appropriations fornational parks as have been made during the last four administrations combined
(B) is expected to unanimously approve a billthat will result in as many appropriations for national parks than have beenmade during the last four administrations combined

(C) are expected to unanimously approve a billthat will result in as many appropriations for national parks than have beenmade during the last four administrations combined
(D) isexpected to unanimously approve a bill that will result in as manyappropriations for national parks as have been made during the last fouradministrations combined
(E) is expected to unanimously approve a billthat will result in as many appropriations for national parks as the last fouradministrations combined
D For e, u cannotcompare appropriations to administrations
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发表于 2022-11-22 15:51:34 | 只看该作者
第一题
A 从句(应该是吧)说的是“一个演员和歌手”,主句马上出现了人名,语法和语义都正确
B 主句没有对应从句的修饰,错误
C 感觉背景和画面调转了,应该强调GK的简历被扩展了
DE 是不是属于run-on呀?应该加个连词

第二题
A fare是单数概念,has increased正确;than前后要对应,正确
BD have increased错误
C than前后不对应
E 应该是“inflation has”?而且先行词where也感觉不太对

第三题
as much noun as noun固定搭配,排除CDE
A 将“营销占预算”这件事情和“研究”这个概念比较了,错误
B 比较上正确

第四题
A 存在歧义,是while employees out of office还是managers out of office呢?
B 存在歧义,是employees联系out of office的managers,还是out of office的employees呢?
C 语义正确
D their的指代存在歧义
E 存在歧义,同A

第五题 错选E
不清楚the data是单数还是复数,通过不划线部分的“they”确定是复数,排除BD
然后因为觉得不需要一般现在时排除AD,选择了E
其实现在也不是很明白,等今晚群里的解析看看

第六题 错选A
没有注意到A缺少谓语,好蠢!!!
现在理解了原句主干:Three federal lawsuits raised questions.

第七题
complex gerund的平行问题

第八题
应该使用最高级,排除AD
BCD中,determine用动词形式更简洁,选B

第九题 错选了B
no element是单数,排除AD
E的时态太怪了我排除
B和C中,一开始我觉得需要加上that of吧,难道不应该比较两个system的element吗?不加的话不就是element和penal system了吗?
看到评论明白了,原来penal system就是justice system中的一个element,真服了。
【在构成我们的司法系统的众多要素中,可能没有任何一个要素比刑法系统更需要修复,尽管有几个州已经颁布了显示出前景的补救性变革】


第十题
the house是单数,排除AC
as many as,排除B
D的比较对象都是appropriations,E的比较对象是appropriations和last four administrations
【在一次史无前例的两党合作中,众议院预计将一致批准一项法案,该法案将使国家公园的拨款达到过去四届政府(对国家公园拨款)的总和】

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发表于 2022-11-22 18:22:05 | 只看该作者
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151        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                                               
B                        修饰对象不对等                       
C                        Gene Kelly was musical 错                       
D        a connector missing before "expanded his resume"
(run-on)                                        expanded副词修饰语,改变语义
E        Run-on                                       
152        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                                               
B        谓语单数                                       
C        定语从句缺谓语                During which 使fare 变成了时间                       
D        谓语单数                                       
E                        than has inflation.,比较对象错误
Where不能修饰fare,fare变成了地点                       
153        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                        比较对象不确定                       
B                                               
C                        As much than 结构错        被动语态,和从句主动语态结构上不平行
While competition does X, analysts note Y.
Both X and Y should be in same voice.               
D                        As much than 结构错                       
E                        As compared to 错误                       
154        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                They指代不清                               
B                        out of the office 修饰不清楚,modify "managers" or "employees/contacting".                       
C                                               
D                Their 指代不清                               
E                They、their指代不清                               
155        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                                                Current表明正在进行 ongoing,continuous,所以使用being collected, are providing
B                Its无指代对象                               
C        Data是复数                                       
D        Data是复数        Its无指代对象                               
E        时态错误,要用进行时                                       
156        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A        缺少谓动词                                       
B        Raises 单数错                定语从句修饰industry错误                       
C        Raises 单数错                                       
D        Charge 和raise缺少连词                                       
E                                               
157        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                                Warming和glacier不平行               
B                                Warming和raising不平行               
C                                Warming和correspondence不平行               
D                                               
E                                Warming和corresponding不平行               
158        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A                        More 不能在all里比较,比较级前不加the                For表目的不如to do       
B                                               
C                                        For表目的不如to do       
D                        More 不能在all里比较                       
E        may be  is a verb phrase
it may be插入语错误                                       
159        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A        主谓不一致                                       
B                        The sentence is comparing elements of the justice
system, "the penal system" vs. other elements.                       
C                                               
D        主谓不一致                                       
E                                               
160        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
A        主谓不一致                                       
B                        As than 结构错误                       
C        主谓不一致                                       
D                                               
E                        Appropriation和administration不可比                       
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