【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day40

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1.(141)Lenders and building managers in the southwestern section of the city report that because of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased, apartment buildings are being rehabilitated at a pace unseen for a decade.   
(A) of the rental market in the area being renewed, as well as the willingness of the banks to lend money being increased
(B) of the renewed rental market in the area, as well as the willingness of banks to lend money increasing
(C) of the renewed rental market in the area and the increased willingness of banks to lend money
(D) the rental market in the area renewed and the willingness of banks to lend money increased, therefore
(E) the rental market in the area was being renewed and banks were increasingly willing to lend money, so  
答案：C
Being renewed, being increased冗杂排除A；as well as前后不对称，排除B；because 和therefore重复，排除D；because和so重复，排除E

2.(142)The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate.     
(A) The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate.
(B) The ability of scientists has become ever more accurate in providing models of the
atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions.
(C) Scientists have become able to provide ever more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions.
(D) Scientists have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the
atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions.
(E) Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions have become ever more
答案：C
The ability have/has become ever more accurate逻辑错误，排除A B E；like不表举例，排除D

3.(143)Although the vast constellation of small islands that dot the South Pacific has a population of only a few million people, it is home to about a sixth of the world's 6,000 or so languages.      
(A) Pacific has a population of only a few million people, it is
(B) Pacific has a population of only a few million people, they are
(C) Pacific is populated by a only a few million people, and it is
(D) Pacific, having a population of only a few million people, is nonetheless
(E) Pacific, populated by only a few million people, yet they are
答案：A
They 无法指代constellation（单数），排除B E；句子结构不完整排除D；a only a few million people表达糅杂，排除C

4.(144)Meteor showers and individual streaks of light that flash across the sky every night are generated when tiny flecks of celestial detritus, often no larger than grains of sand or of pebbles, burn up speeding through the atmosphere.        
(A) grains of sand or of pebbles, burn up speeding
(B) grains of sand or pebbles, burn up while speeding
(C) grains of sand or pebbles, which burn up while speeding
(D) a grain of sand or pebble, which burns up as it speeds
(E) a grain of sand or a pebble, burns up when it speeds
答案：B
Burn up 与speeding的关系不明，排除A；which修饰pebbles/pebble，不正确，排除C D；it指代不明，排除E

5.(145)The Kwakiutl recognized one social unit larger than the tribe--the confederacy, which was a cluster of loosely knit, informally related neighboring tribes who interacted with themselves more often than between other tribes.      
(A) tribes who interacted with themselves more often than between
(B) tribes who interacted among each other more often than among
(C) tribes who interacted with one another more often than with
(D) tribes, interacting among each other more often than between
(E) tribes, interacting among one another more often than with  
答案：C
Interact between other tribes, between只用于两者之间，排除A D; interact among each other, among 用于三者或三者以上，排除B E

6.(146)The gyrfalcon, an Arctic bird of prey, has survived a close brush with extinction; its numbers are now five times greater than when the use of DDT was sharply restricted in the early 1970's.      
(A) extinction; its numbers are now five times greater than
(B) extinction; its numbers are now five times more than
(C) extinction, their numbers now fivefold what they were
(D) extinction, now with fivefold the numbers they had
(E) extinction, now with numbers five times greater than  
谓语has表明主语为单数，排除C D；A？B？

7.(147)Australian embryologists have found evidence that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolved as a kind of snorkel.         
(A) that suggests that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal, and its trunk originally evolved
(B) that has suggested the elephant descended from an aquatic animal, its trunk originally evolving
(C) suggesting that the elephant had descended from an aquatic animal with its trunk originally evolving
(D) to suggest that the elephant has descended from an aquatic animal and its trunk originally evolved
(E) to suggest that the elephant is descended from an aquatic animal and that its trunk originally evolved
答案：E
And its trunk originally evolved前后跟谁并列，模糊，排除A；be descended from搭配，排除B C D

8.(148)The United States will be affected by whether Taiwan develops a closer relationship with mainland China or preserves the status quo, since the island nation is the United States' seventh-largest trading partner.   
(A) The United States will be affected by whether Taiwan develops a closer relationship with mainland China or preserves the status quo
(B) Whether or not Taiwan develops a closer relationship with mainland China or preserves the status quo affecting the United States
(C) Whether or not Taiwan develops a closer relationship with mainland China or the status quo is preserved, it will affect the United States
(D) It affects the United States whether Taiwan will develop a closer relationship with mainland China or preserves the status quo
(E) It affects the United States whether or not Taiwan will develop a closer relationship with mainland China or preserve the status quo
答案：A
句子重点改变，排除B；or前后不对称，排除C D；E？

9.(149)The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting how rising greenhouse gas concentrations could affect climate.        
(A) The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting
(B) The effect on global warming of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict
(C) The effect of ocean white caps on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used to predict
(D) That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet having been incorporated in any detail into the computer models that
are used for predicting
(E) That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet being incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict
答案：C
The effect are one of…主谓不一致，排除A B；having been incorporated排除D；being incorporated 排除E

10.(150)Hydrocarbons, with which fruit flies perfume themselves in species-specific blends, are known to be important in courtship, and apparently this assists flies that taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates to distinguish their own species from that of others.     
(A) and apparently this assists flies that taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates to distinguish their own species from that of
(B) and apparently this assists flies when they taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates in distinguishing their own species from those of
(C) which apparently assists flies that taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates in being able to distinguish their own species from
(D) apparently assisting flies to taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates to distinguish their own species from those of
(E) apparently assisting flies that taste the hydrocarbons on prospective mates in distinguishing their own species from
答案：E
This不能裸奔排除A B; which修饰courtship，错误，排除C；those 指代不明排除D

11.(151)A new study finds that the more hostility people show in their behavior and attitudes, then calcium deposits are more likely to be in the arteries of their hearts.         
(A) then calcium deposits are more likely to be
(B) then the more likely calcium deposits are
(C) the more there are likely to be calcium deposits
(D) the more likely they are to have calcium deposits
(E) the more likely there are to be calcium deposits
答案：D
The more…the more…排除A B; there are likely to be 表达错误，排除C E

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1.

答案：C

解析：

A.because of...being done as well as...being done表达不简洁。

B.as well as前后结构不平行。

C.because of 【the renewed rental market in the area 】and【 the increased willingness of banks to lend money】，and前后结构平行。

D.because和therefore连用，语意重复，错误。

E.because和so连用，语意重复，错误。

2.

答案：C

解析：

A.用like表举例，错误。主谓不一致，错误。ability不能用变得更加accurate来形容。

B.ability不能用变得更加accurate来形容。ability of sb in doing用法错误。

D.用like表举例，错误。ability不能用变得更加accurate来形容。ability for doing用法错误。

E.主谓不一致，错误。ability不能用变得更加accurate来形容。

3.

答案：A

解析：

B.they无指代，错误。

C.although和yet连用，错误，although表让步转折，and表并列，且although引导让步状语从句，主句部分应该是独立句子结构。

D.整个结构只有although引导的让步状语从句，缺少主句，错误。

E.although和yet连用，错误。they无指代，错误。

4.

答案：B

解析：

A.or后面的of多余，grains of sand译为”沙砾“，pebbles译为”卵石“，二者是并列关系，而or of会改变意思，变为grains of pebbles，错误。

B.often no larger than grains of sand or pebbles作插入语成分。

C.which就近修饰pebbles，错误，burn up应该是tiny flecks of celestial detritus发出的动作。

D.which就近修饰pebbles，错误，burn up应该是tiny flecks of celestial detritus发出的动作。it错误地指代了a grain of...。

E.主谓不一致，错误，burn up的主语是flecks of...，应该用动词的复数形式。it错误地指代了a grain of...。

5.

答案：C

解析：

A.than前后不平行，错误。interact 应该搭配介词with。

B.each other与among搭配，错误，each other表示两者之间互相，among用于形容三者及以上之间。interact 应该搭配介词with。

D.than前后不平行，错误。each other与among搭配，错误，each other表示两者之间互相，among用于形容三者及以上之间。interact 应该搭配介词with。

E.than前后不平行，错误。interact 应该搭配介词with。

6.

答案：A

解析：

B.numbers应该用greater修饰，表程度，不用more修饰。

C.their、they无指代，错误。

D.they无指代，错误。with...离其修饰对象太远，有就近修饰extinction的歧义。with表意模糊，不用来表结果（？）。

E.with...离其修饰对象太远，有就近修饰extinction的歧义。with表意模糊，不用来表结果（？）。

7.

答案：E

解析：

A.evidence that suggests that...表达不简洁，embarrassed。suggest that...and that...双宾语结构，两个that不可省略。

B.descended from...的用法错误，应该是be descended from...表示是...的后裔。“，doing...”表伴随/结果，错误，原句中是并列关系。

C.descended from...的用法错误，应该是be descended from...表示是...的后裔。with的使用导致句子重心改变，错误。suggest that...and that...双宾语结构，两个that不可省略。

D.descended from...的用法错误，应该是be descended from...表示是...的后裔。

8.

答案：A

解析：

B.少谓语，错误。这里没有必要使用whether or not，因为并不是表一件事情的正反面，而是两件事情之间的选择，用or即可，whether or not多余。

C.it指代不明，错误。这里没有必要使用whether or not，因为并不是表一件事情的正反面，而是两件事情之间的选择，用or即可，whether or not多余。

D.or前后动词形式不平行，错误。

E.这里没有必要使用whether or not，因为并不是表一件事情的正反面，而是两件事情之间的选择，用or即可，whether or not多余。

9.

答案：C

解析：

A.主谓不一致，错误，effect作主语，谓语动词应该用单数。

B.they无指代，错误。主谓不一致，错误，effect作主语，谓语动词应该用单数。

D.having been done作后置定语，错误。

E.being冗余。

10.

答案：E

解析：

A.this单独使用，错误。

B.this单独使用，错误。

C.which指代前面整个句子，错误。

D.逻辑语义被改变，错误，that taste..在原句中作定语修饰flies，这里变成了目的状语，错误。

11.

答案：D

解析：

A.the more...，the more...句型使用错误。缺少动作发出者，错误。then多余。

B.缺少动作发出者，错误。then多余。

C.缺少动作发出者，错误。there be句型不简洁。

E.缺少动作发出者，错误。there be句型不简洁。

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1.(141)C
Being renewed, being increased多余 排除A；as well as前后不对称，排除B；because 和therefore重复，排除D；because和so重复，排除E

2.(142)C

3.(143)A
They 没有指代对象，排除B E；句子结构不完整排除D

4.(144)B
which修饰pebbles/pebble，排除C D；it指代不明，排除E

5.(145)C
between只用于两者之间，排除A D; interact among each other, among 用于三者或三者以上，排除B E

6.(146)A

7.(147)E
And its trunk originally evolved前后跟谁并列，模糊，排除A；be descended from搭配，排除B C D

8.(148)A

9.(149)C
主谓不一致，排除A B；having been incorporated排除D；being incorporated 排除E

10.(150)E
This裸奔，排除A B; which修饰courtship，错误，排除C；those 指代不明排除D

11.(151)D
The more…the more…排除A B; there are likely to be 表达错误，排除C E