【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day29

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2、状语被动用法错误
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Day 29
1.(31)According to some economists, the July decrease in unemployment so that it was the lowest in two years suggests that the gradual improvement in the job market is continuing.
(A) so that it was the lowest in two years
(B) so that it was the lowest two-year rate
(C) to what would be the lowest in two years
(D) to a two-year low level
(E) to the lowest level in two years  
这里划线部分划线的是decrease的modifierso that 表示目的，是引导从句的，但是这里这里为了简介不需要从句
decrease to 选cde
c 不需要过去的将来时， pass掉
d 不清晰，没说最低
选e


2.(32)Initiated five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992, Project SETI pledged a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence.
(A) Initiated five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992, Project SETI pledged a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence.
(B) Initiated on Columbus Day 1992, five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World, a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence was pledged by Project SETI.
(C) Initiated on Columbus Day 1992, five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World, Project SETI pledged a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence.
(D) Pledging a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence, the initiation of Project SETI five centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World on Columbus Day 1992.
(E) Pledging a $100 million investment in the search for extraterrestrial intelligence five
centuries after Europeans arrived in the New World, on Columbus Day 1992, the initiation of Project SETI took place.  
看split猜测考点：整段句子划线，看不出来split，只能一个个看
句意理解了，这里句子意思是考点：这个项目是在1992的年开始的。
a）时间不清晰
b）时间可以，被动不好
c）时间可以，主动。
d）missing verb
e）第一个modifier太长，不知道在修是什么；中间还有介词短语的modifier，不对； pass
选c


3.(33)More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(A) More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's Lake Baikal, which holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(B) With 20 percent of the world's fresh water, that is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal has more than 300 rivers that drain into it.
(C) Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh water than all that of the North American Great Lakes combined, 20 percent.
(D) While more than 300 rivers drain into it, Siberia's Lake Baikal holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.
(E) More than all the North American Great Lakes combined, Siberia's Lake Baikal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.
浏览split，猜测考点--》pronoun（it）；subject agreement；
a 句子不完美，看下面的
b that修饰，前面是没有逗号的；后面半句，像siberia有大于三百条河，这个意思是错的 （大错）
c with+主语+doing格外小心，意思变成和超过300条河； 双主语 sentence （典型的混淆--前面有主语，中间两个逗号，后面再来个代词，这句话就有两个主语了）（大错）
d 先来个it存疑；这里的while一般便是转折，但是这边不需要转折。句子意思不对。（大错）
e 是这个湖的水多于。。。。，不是这个湖，存疑；with+doing存疑。

对比下来a更好，没有大错，但是比其他几个好一些
  

4.(34)Hundreds of species of fish generate and discharge electric currents, in bursts or as steady electric fields around their bodies, using their power either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating.
(A) either to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or also for communicating and navigating
(B) either for finding and attacking prey, defend themselves, or for communication and navigation
(C) to find and attack prey, for defense, or communication and navigation
(D) for finding and attacking prey, to defend themselves, or also for communication and navigation
(E) to find and attack prey, to defend themselves, or to communicate and navigate  
浏览句子和split，猜测考点--》either..or..--> tag 平行
a 前面是to do， 后面是or 大错
b defend是modifier，应该以分词形式出现，大错
c tag是or，or后面都是名词，前面是 to do 大错
d for doing和for 名词，不好
e 平行起码对了，兵器比d好

选e


5.(35)In laboratory rats, a low dose of aspirin usually suffices to block production of thromboxane, which is a substance that promotes blood clotting, but not seriously interfering with the production of prostacyclin, which prevents clotting.
(A) which is a substance that promotes blood clotting, but not seriously interfering
(B) a substance that promotes blood clotting, but not seriously interfering
(C) a substance that promotes blood clotting, but does not seriously interfere
(D) which is a substance to promote blood clotting, but does not seriously interfere
(E) which is a substance that promotes blood clotting, but not a serious interference  
浏览句子和split，猜测考点--》but--> tag 平行
in laboratory rats (这个是介词短语，可以不看，主要讲这个aspirin）；这里的modifier应该modify的是hromboxane；后面的but也是一起修饰的，所以but平行的应该是that后面的东西。后面不重要了。
a but前后要平行，前面promotes后面doing，大错
b but前后要平行，前面promotes后面doing，大错
c but前后要平行，前面promotes后面does not intefere可以
d but前后要平行，前面to do后面does not intefere大错
e but前后要平行，前面promotes后面noun大错

c正确

6.(36)Thomas Eakins's powerful style and his choices of subject--the advances in modern surgery, the discipline of sport, the strains of individuals in tension with society or even with themselves--was as disturbing to his own time as it is compelling for ours.
(A) was as disturbing to his own time as it is
(B) were as disturbing to his own time as they are
(C) has been as disturbing in his own time as they are
(D) had been as disturbing in his own time as it was
(E) have been as disturbing in his own time as  

浏览句子和split，猜测考点--》主谓一致；时态
Thomas Eakins's powerful style and his choices of subject 动词一定复数，破折号可以不用看
a，c 排除

句子意思很重要，在他的时代非常令人不安，在我们这个时代就有多令人兴奋。
e没有时态的先后
我觉得b

7.(37)One report concludes that many schools do not have, or likely to have, enough computers to use them effectively.
(A) or
(B) nor
(C) or are
(D) nor are they
(E) nor are not  


浏览句子和split，猜测考点--》平行tag，idiom（be likely to do)
这里有likely to do一定前面要有be，现在前面没有be，一定要加，a，b排除
e 不能双重否定，e排除
要表示否定 选择d

不表示否定的话，两个都可以，因为nor也可以链接两个句子（fanboys）

选d


8.(38)Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled against the unnatural complexity of human relations in modern society.
(A) Like Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(B) Like Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
(C) As Rousseau, Tolstoi rebelled
(D) As did Rousseau, Tolstoi's rebellion was
(E) Tolstoi's rebellion, as Rousseau's, was  
b 对比的东西不一样，错
c 这里的对比用like
d 对比的痛惜不一样
e不对
选a 我感觉


9.(39)The Sports Medicine Programs of the Olympic Training Center, a complex where final tryouts are held for athletes representing the United States in the Olympics, is geared toward enhancing athletes' performance and toward their preparation for international competition.
(A) is geared toward enhancing athletes' performance and toward their preparation
(B) is geared to enhance the performance of athletes and to prepare them
(C) are geared to enhance athletes' performance and their preparation
(D) are geared toward the enhancement of athletes' performance and toward preparing them
(E) are geared toward enhancing the performance of athletes and preparing them  

浏览句子和split，猜测考点--》主谓一致， and平行；idiom
programs are， a b排除

e  enhancing the performance of athletes  和  preparing them for international competition， 都是toward的宾语，对
d the enhancement of athletes' performance   preparing them for international competition； noun 和 prepare for不平行 错
c enhance不能加preparation （只有提高表现，没有提高准备） 错

e正确

10.(40)With an awareness that there are connotations associated with the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B, companies conducting consumer taste tests of foods or beverages typically choose numbers such as 697 or 483 to label the products.
(A) With an awareness that there are connotations associated with the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B
(B) Because the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B have connotations they are aware of
(C) Because of an awareness of the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B having connotations
(D) Aware of the connotations of the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B
(E) Since the numbers 1 and 2 and the letters A and B have connotations associated with them and they are aware of it

确实这里是一个因果关系，with有些薄弱
b 这个they很忌讳，先看后面
c of something doing 大忌 意思变成了对数字 1，2的认知
d 我觉得很简洁
e代词乱飘，啰嗦，错

选d

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1.
答案：E
解析：
A.用so that修饰动词，错误。
B.用so that修饰动词，错误。
C.用would时态错误，表客观事实应该用现在时。
D.two-year low level可以被理解为low level会持续两年，有改变原逻辑语义的歧义，错误。

2.
答案：C
解析：

A.on Columbus Day 1992有修饰欧洲人登陆的歧义，错误。
B.逻辑主语错误。
D.逻辑主语错误。on Columbus Day 1992有修饰欧洲人登陆的歧义，错误。句子重心改变，错误。
E.逻辑主语错误。句子重心改变，错误。

3.
答案：A
解析：
B.that使用错误，非限定性定语从句只能用which作引导词。
C.it多余，前面已经有主语。
D.while的使用改变原句语义，且缺少主句，错误。
E.with的使用使得原句的重心改变，错误。

4.
答案：E
解析：
A.either...or...结构，前后动词形式和结构不平行，错误。also多余。
B.either...or...结构，前后动词形式和结构不平行，错误。
C.either...or...结构，前后动词形式和结构不平行，错误。also多余。
D.either...or...结构，前后动词形式和结构不平行，错误。
E.三个to do不定式结构平行，且表目的最好用to do，正确。

5.
答案：C
解析：
A.but前后的动词形式不平行，错误。
B.but前后的动词形式不平行，错误。
C.同位语结构优选。
D.but前后的动词形式不平行，错误。
E.but前后的动词形式不平行，错误。逻辑语义改变，错误。

6.
答案：B
解析：
A.主谓不一致，错误。
C.主谓不一致，错误。现在完成时的时态错误。
D.it指代不明，不能用于指代style and choices。
E.现在完成时的时态错误，前后比较的是过去和现在，分别用一般过去时和一般现在时比较，所以第二个as后面不应该省略they are。

7.
答案：D
解析：
A.or使用错误，应该用nor表示“既不…也不”的意思。缺少系动词，错误。
B.缺少系动词，错误。
C.or使用错误，应该用nor表示“既不…也不”的意思。
E.nor和not语意重复，会变成双重否定，错误。

8.
答案：A.
解析：
B.比较对象不对等，错误。
C.as+名词是表示作为...的意思，错误。
D.比较对象不对等，错误。
E.as+名词是表示作为...的意思，错误。

9.
答案：E
解析：
A.主谓不一致，错误。and前后动词形式不平行，错误。
B.主谓不一致，错误。
C.and前后动词形式不平行，错误。
D.and前后动词形式不平行，错误。

10.
答案：D
解析：
A.there are的表达wordy。
B.they指代不明，错误。
C.because of+n.+having...，because of后面加短语，错误（？）。句子强调的重心connotation被改变，错误。
E.them、they、it指代不明，错误。

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