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        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
51A                                               
B                                Not only but also 不平行               
C                                Not only but also 不平行               
D                                Not only but also 不平行               
E                                Not only but also 不平行               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
52A                                And前后不平行               
B                                And前后不平行               
C                        In addition to her work,Marry...,seems opening modifier is referring to Mary,but actually we have 3 contributions.                        
D                        除了her work,她的贡献还有.....In addition to her work, Leakey's contributions.....                       
E                                And前后不平行,painstaking a. 辛苦的               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
53A                        比较对象不对等                       
B                                               
C                        vaccine does not get derived by itself;天花病本身不能拥有病毒,类似的题目有OG North Pole北极本身并不拥有线索,所以要改为clues to North Pole                       
D                        比较对象不对等                       
E                        比较对象不对等                       
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
54A                        Unlike后应该加n,using和they比较对象不对等                       
B                        ,in using...,既可以修饰前一个分句又可以修饰后一个分句;they精确指代用cooking的spices,比较对象不对等,应该是spices that are used in medicine;in gmat:Unlike x.., y.., the "y" comes DIRECTLY after the "Unlike x" part.                       
C                        比较不对等                       
D                        spices are used' and 'spices are taken' are parallel.                       
E                They可以指spices,也可以指quantities
(但可以容忍,因为they是指代spices,都是S,parallel to the pronoun)        比较不够平行,前一个是usage of spices,后一个是pices                        


        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
55A        Which指代waters,谓语用复数;习惯用语whether A ,B, or C        Them they 指代不一致                                Which指waters水域把古迹暴露在外,而应该用where 古迹暴露在这片水域
B                                               
C                        Including表示为群体中包含某项,而这里是anyone,是个体                       
D        More than固定搭配                                       
E        More than固定搭配        It没有指代                               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
56A                                And前后不平行               
B                                And前后不平行               
C                                               
D                                And前后不平行               
E                                And前后不平行               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
57A        两个谓动词were,应该一个用and连接                                       
B                        of up to 600 rooms each,插入语修饰structures;connected分词跳过插入语修饰前面邻近的名词structures                        语义比C更合理:每个structures有600个房间,这些structures被roads连接
C                                                Had been过去完成时没有必要性;将with改成of后,介词修饰对象改变,with修饰built,of修饰scale,同时each变成修饰邻近rooms,但是房间被马路连接不符合语义和逻辑
D                                And连接不平行And连接,on..和with...平行,改变了原文合理语义               
E        Each后面是完整句子但没有连词连接                                        Had been过去完成时没有必要性
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
58A                                Both and 不平行               
B                                Both and 不平行               
C                                Both and 不平行               
D                                               
E                                Both and 不平行               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
59A                                Not but 结构不平行               
B                                Not but 结构不平行               
C                                               
D                                Not but 结构不平行               
E                                Not but 结构不平行               
        主谓一致/句子结构        代词指代        修饰/比较        平行        有效简洁        语义逻辑
60A                        比较对象不对等:rate和group                       
B                        比较对象不对等                       
C                        Exceeding修饰rates of entrepreneurship,Those代替前面出现的rates,比较双方对应                       
D                        比较对象不对等                       
E        主谓不一致,主语是rates                                       
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Day31
1.(51)Gasolinemarketing is undergoing major changes as stations often not only add convenience stores but alsocombine with major fast-food chains to build complexes where customers can shop and eat aswell as buy gasoline.
(A) not only addconvenience stores but also combine with major fast-food chains to build
(B) not only addconvenience stores but also they combine with major fast-food chains to build
(C) are not onlyadding convenience stores but also in combination with major fast-food chainsthey build
(D) add not onlyconvenience stores, but also combining with major fast-food chains to build
(E) are not onlyadding convenience stores, but also in combining with major fast-food chainsthey build
A



2.(52)Inaddition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology withher discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity andpainstakingly documenting East African cave paintings.
(A) Leakeycontributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(B) Leakeycontributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence ofhominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
(C) Leakey was acontributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) Leakey'scontributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
(E) Leakey'scontributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
使用 contributor  改变了原句的意思,with 意思太广泛,不如 include  表达意思精确
  
  
D✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  





3.(53)Mostvaccines are derived from weakened or killed strains of the same virus thatthey prevent, unlike thederivation of smallpox vaccine from a different virus altogether.
(A) the derivationof smallpox vaccine from a different virus altogether
(B) smallpoxvaccine, which is derived from a different virus altogether
(C) smallpox'svaccine, which gets derived from a different virus altogether
(D) when smallpoxvaccine is derived from an altogether different virus
(E) the altogetherdifferent virus from which smallpox vaccine is derived
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B✔
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C❓
  
纠结选项
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
smallpox’s vaccine 表达错误,原文表达的意思是天花疫苗,而不是属于天花的疫苗
  
  
D
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  






4.(54)Unlike using spices for cooking, in medicinalusage they are taken inlarge quantities in order to treat particular maladies.
(A) Unlike usingspices for cooking, in medicinal usage they are taken
(B) Unlike spicesthat are used in cooking, in using spices for medicine, they are taken
(C) Unlike cookingwith spices, taking spices for medicinal use is done
(D) In cooking,small quantities of spices are used, whereas in medicinal usage spices aretaken
(E) In cooking, theusage of spices is in small quantities, whereas in medicinal usage they aretaken
D



5.(55)Shipwrecksare more likely to be found undisturbed at great depths than in shallow coastal waters, which exposesarchaeological remains to turbulence and makes them accessible to anyone inscuba gear, whether they be archaeologist, treasure hunter, or sport diver.
(A) than in shallowcoastal waters, which exposes archaeological remains to turbulence and makesthem accessible to anyone in scuba gear, whether they be
(B) than in shallowcoastal waters, where archaeological remains are exposed to turbulence and areaccessible to anyone in scuba gear, whether
(C) as opposed toshallow waters along the coast, where archaeological remains are exposed toturbulence and are accessible to anyone in scuba gear, including
(D) instead of inshallow waters along the coast, which exposes archaeological remains toturbulence and makes them accessible to anyone in scuba gear, including an
(E) instead ofshallow coastal waters, because it exposes archaeological remains to turbulenceand makes them accessible to anyone in scuba gear, whether
B



6.(56)Firstdiscovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inchanimal found in the Philippines andthat resembles ahummingbird, has shimmering metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orangepatch, bordered with red tufts, in the center of its breast; and a red eye.
(A) found in thePhilippines and that resembles
(B) found in thePhilippines and that, resembling
(C) found in thePhilippines and resembling
(D) that is found inthe Philippines and it resembles
(E) that is found inthe Philippines and that, resembling
C



7.(57)TheAnasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale with more than 75 carefully engineeredstructures, of up to 600 rooms each, were connected by a complex regional system of roads.
(A) with more than75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were
(B) with more than75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each,
(C) of more than 75carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms, each that had been
(D) of more than 75carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms and with each
(E) of more than 75carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms each had been
B



8.(58)Both weakened by concern about the government'sagreement with the International Monetary Fund and by growing fears of a risein inflation, the country's currency continued its slide to a record lowagainst the dollar, which forced the central bank to intervene for the fourth time in a week.
(A) Both weakened byconcern about the government's agreement with the International Monetary Fundand by growing fears of a rise in inflation, the country's currency continuedits slide to a record low against the dollar, which forced
(B) Both concernabout the government's agreement with the International Monetary Fund and thegrowing fears of a rise in inflation weakened the country's currency,continuing its slide to a record low against the dollar, which forced
(C) Both because itwas weakened by concern about the government's agreement with the InternationalMonetary Fund and by growing fears of a raise in inflation, the country'scurrency continued its slide to a record low against the dollar, forcing
(D) The country'scurrency, weakened both by concern about the government's agreement with theInternational Monetary Fund and by growing fears of a rise in inflation,continued its slide to a record low against the dollar, forcing
(E) The country'scurrency, weakened by both concern about the government's agreement with theInternational Monetary Fund and growing fears of a raise in inflation,continued its slide to a record low against the dollar, which forced
D



9.(59)Anew genetically engineered papaya was producednot by seed companies who have been motivated by profit, which was the casewith most genetically modified crops previously approved for commercial use,but universityand United States Department of Agriculture researchers who allowed growers touse it free of charge.
(A) produced not byseed companies who have been motivated by profit, which was the case with mostgenetically modified crops previously approved for commercial use, but
(B) produced not byprofit-motivated seed companies, the case with most genetically modified cropspreviously approved for commercial use, but
(C) produced not byprofit-motivated seed companies, as was the case with most genetically modifiedcrops previously approved for commercial use, but by
(D) not produced byprofit-motivated seed companies, which was the case with most geneticallymodified crops previously approved for commercial use, but was produced by
(E) not produced byseed companies who have been motivated by profit, the case with mostgenetically modified crops previously approved for commercial use, but by
C



10.(60)Mideast immigrants' rates of entrepreneurshipexceed virtuallyevery other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse United States economy.
(A) Mideastimmigrants' rates of entrepreneurship exceed
(B) Mideastimmigrants are exhibiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding
(C) Immigrants fromthe Mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding those of
(D) The rates ofentrepreneurship in immigrants from the Mideast exceed
(E) The rates ofMideast immigrants' entrepreneurship exceeds those of
C
  
  
  
主谓一致/句子结构
  
  
平行
  
  
修饰/比较
  
  
代词/指代
  
  
有效性和简洁性
  
  
语义逻辑
  
  
A
  
  
  
  
不平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
B
  
  
  
  
不平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
C✔
  
  
  
  
  
rate和rate平行,immigrants和immigrants平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
D
  
  
  
  
不平行
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
E
  
  
rates和exceeds主谓不一致
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  



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