Day 14 打卡
1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the【主语不对等】
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a【as后面不是完整的句子】
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a【正确，just A do, so do B，所以后面的so并不是多余的】【just as A do, so B do平行比较结构的习惯搭配：意思是：就如同A…B…。不过与大多数并行性信号不同的是，它在每个部分之后都需要一个独立的子句(一种相对不 常见的结构)，所以不要轻易判断为错】
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the【so多余】
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the【so多余，句子中出现两个连词】
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win【the novelist who became the first woman应该是the first woman to become novelist】
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won【he first Swedish writer that应该是the first to do；as well as不如and】【She无指代，and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事；turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了“弃前取后”的逻辑关系；as well as有主次之分， 分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系】
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning【the first Swedish writer winning错误；in addition to不如and】
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win【正确】
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won【the first Swedish writer that错误；becoming与turn away之间不具备因果联系，不是改变方向就能获奖】【from…and错误同B；that不能指代 人；句子逻辑上主次颠倒了，重心放到了前半部分】
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred【允许钱被转移，多了宾补】
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction【允许转移】
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred【allow that错误】
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction【 允许转移；having been placed作为定语错误】
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred【允许钱被转移，多了宾补；使用句子比A 好】【正确】
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating【正确】【dating用了分词形式，其潜在时态与主句一致】
B.both of which have dated【which有指代communities的风险；且作为定语从句只与名词有关，但是该句子明显应该是解释前面的句子】【date的现在完成时有潜在 含义说“以后都不是追溯到1000年以前了”，要用一般现在时或者分词形式，分词形式的潜在时态与主句一致。】
C.and each has dated【并列关系不对，应该是解释两个最老的】
D.and each one dating【and后面应该是完整句子】
E.each one of which date【date应该使用单数】
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for【because of不能加句子】
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of【and putting没有并列的】【volcanic activity并不是put gold within reach of anybody的直接原因， 而是gold-breaing riverbeds thrust to the surface的直接原因，所以第三个并列名词应该是ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds而不是volcanic activity； and putting和前面 的名词短语erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface逻辑上不能并列，实际上后者 三个名词是Put的行为主使。】
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of【and putting没有并列的】【 had thrust用过去完成 时表示了thrust发生在主句之前，可thrust是个缓慢持续，至今仍在发生的过程，用 过去完成时不合 适】
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for【since应该加完整句子】
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of【正确】
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of【making作为状语修饰was marked错误，应该是描述工业革命这个名词，所以作定语更合适；their多余】【to mass-produce不定式表示动作趋势，而mass-produce goods是已经发生的事实，所以用名词the mass production of manufactured goods更为恰当】
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of【making作状语错误】【缺少谓语动词，was，应该是要表达被动语态】
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using【it形式宾语只能指代不定式或者复合不定式，不能指代that句子？；using不如use，their多余】
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of【正确】
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using【主句缺少谓语】
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【应该是介绍另两本书，而不是两位作者】
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison【including应该是介绍介绍整体，不能表示介绍另外两个】
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【including问题】
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【人的问题】
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man【正确】
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is【正确】
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and【像30英尺那么大，错误，应该是30英尺那么长；growing作为状语错误】【as big as 和long重复，用一个就好(size和length是同一概念)。】
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being【growing作为状语错误】
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is【includes错误】
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is【includes错误；and it is错误】
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve【正确】
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve【between 1876 and 1904作为状语错误】【lead发生在过去，不应该用现在时态（现在完成时），have lead表示了concern至今 依然持续；Between 1876 and 1904有修饰systems的歧义，意思变成了systems只有在1876和1904年之间存在，但是construction确实只有在这几年存在！！！】
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving【错误，between 1876 and 1904作为时间状语，而非定语；for doing？】【have led时态错误，have lead表示了concern至今依然持续；Between 1876 and 1904 放在lead后面修饰lead只在1876和1904年期间导致了construction，而1904年以后又导致了其他事情，改变句意；表示动作的目的用to do而不用for doing】D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving【这里有担忧，错误】 E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving【这里有担忧，错误】 10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient. A. as B. than C. that【正确，引导定语从句，修饰price】 D. of what E. at which
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