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Day14
1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
B✖ C✔
A: the background和the nautical archaeologist不平行，A错误；just like表达wordy； in order to不如to简洁
B: B错误；just as后面没有so/as/so too搭配， 比较结构错误； just as后面句子主谓不完整
C: 正确
D: D错误；like…, so…比较结构错误； evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history打破了原来的目的状语结构， evaluate应该是requires a BG in art history的目的
E: 不平行，E错误；as…, so...比较结构错误； 前一个分句更改原句合理句意； as…,so…逻辑上前后不平行
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
D
句意：作为一名从自由现实主义转变为写农民生活和北瑞典风景的浪漫主义故事的小说家，SL在1909年成为获得诺贝尔文学奖的第一个女性和第一个瑞典作家
A: in 1909位置不对，不是SL在1909是小说家，而是在1909获奖；became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer，意思是SL成为第一个女人，A错误；in 1909放在Selma前面不好， turning away的修饰对象Selma被隔远了(也是一个典型错误)； in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist荒谬的说SL只有在1909年才从现实主义文学成为浪漫小说家， 应该是1909年成为first woman…； and后面的多出了was使得原义变为SL是第一个女人， 意思不对， 应去掉was
B: She和SL割裂，B错误；She无指代， and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事； turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了“弃前取后” 的逻辑关系； as well as有主次之分，分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系， 使得that仅指代了Swedish writer， 使得前面became the first woman成为第一个女人， 意思不对
C: “in addition to” 将整个结构完全分解为两个独立的部分， 使句子含义犯了成为“第一个女人” 的错误，C错误；the first…winning习惯用法错误，应该是the first to win
D: 正确；在这里如果去掉了also反而不好了， 如果就X and Y， 一般是用于指两个不同的人， 如果有了also， 一般指的是对同一个对象的两个描述， 不过去掉also问题也不大； first woman和first Swedish writer必须平起平坐(凭这点就能排除A,B,C)； the first…to do sth正确用法
E: 强调重点颠倒E，E错误； in 1909的位置不好， 最好是放在becoming后面； that不能指代人
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
E
A: because of 应该+名词/动名词，A错误；because of后面累赘， 混乱， awkward
B: 错误同A，B错误; because of后面累赘； allow sth.后所接的一长串过于累赘
C: 没有允许的含义在里面，C错误；如果allow意为允许， 则需要用allow sb. to do sth.搭配； If "allows that" did mean "permits," you'd have to change the "is transferred" to "to be transferred,"。
D: awkward，D错误；Allow sth.后所接的一长串过于累赘；having been不能做限定性修饰
E:
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
B✖ A✔
注意：不要觉得复杂的就是对的，不要对A选项有偏见
A: 正确；both dating独立主格在此表示补充说明， 与each型独立主格同一原理； 这里both用each来替代也可以； dating用了分词形式， 其潜在时态与主句一致
B: B错误；which指代的是two oldest surviving Pueblo communities， 带入即both of two oldest surviving Pueblo communities可以发现both和two重复； date的现在完成时有潜在含义说“以后都不是追溯到1000年以前了”， 要用一般现在时或者分词形式， 分词形式的潜在时态与主句一致。
C: C错误；有and作为并列连词割裂了前后关系； 现在完成时错误同B
D: D错误；and后面句子不完整(fragment)
E: each用单三，E错误；且定从不如同位语简洁
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
D✖ E✔
句意：在加州黄金淘金热时期探金是很容易的事情， 冲蚀， 史前冰山运动， 被火山运动推到地表来的古老的产金河床把金子放到有淘金盘或铲子的人们触手可及的地方
注意：长难句，一定要抓主干！一定要找好谓语动词
A: because of 后面接了谓语动词put，A错误；reach for anybody含义错误
B: and putting 和前面主语不平行；because of后的核心名词是erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface， 而并不是”事件”，逻辑含义错误； volcanic activity并不是put gold within reach of anybody的直接原因，而是gold-breaking riverbeds thrust to the surface的直接原因， 所以第三个并列名词应该是ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds而不是volcanic activity； and putting和前面的名词短语erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that hadthrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface逻辑上不能并列， 实际上后者三个名词是Put的行为主使。
C: and putting错误同B；不需要用had been时态，C错误； owing to和because of用法相似， 错误亦同B中的because of； had thrust用过去完成时表示了thrust发生在主句之前， 可thrust是个缓慢持续， 至今仍在发生的过程， 用过去完成时不合 适； volcanic activity在逻辑上与 erosion， prehistoric glaciermovement不平行
D: D错误；since从句没有谓语动词， putting应改为put； reach for错误同A； 并不是火山运动把金子放到触手可及的地方， 而是被火山运动能够推到地表的河床
E: 正确；since表示顺其自然的原因， 用在此最合适； erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds三者并列没有问题， 三者确实都是行使put这一动作的事物， 虽然前两个是抽象性名词， 后者是具体的实物名词， 但功能相同（难点， 很容易因为这一点而排除了E） ； thrust在此为过去分词, 意为猛推
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
D
A: their指代不清，A错误；their无所指， 若指代goods则逻辑意思错误； 虽然make it possible to do sth.搭配没
有问题， 但to mass-produce不定式表示动作趋势， 而mass-produce goods是已经发生的事实， 所以用名词the mass production of manufactured goods更为恰当
B: 缺少谓语动词，B错误
C: made it possible that…累赘；their错误同A；by ones' using累赘，C错误；用that引导名词性成分累赘； manufactured goods were mass-produced(产品都是量产)改变原句合理含义(量产产品)
D: 正确；用make it possible to mass-produce或make possible the mass prodcution都没有问题
E: 没有谓语，E错误； make sth. adj.中如果sth.太长通常后置到adj.后； using的动作发出者成了Industrial Revolution， 不合逻辑
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
B✖ D✔
A: 主语应该是书，A错误； 破折号之前的主语是Cane这本书， 后面平行的也需要对应是书而不是人， 所以后面
的平行错误； 语法上a black american或black americans都没有错， 但在此用单数更为清晰， 明确指出了一本书是一个人写， 而没有多个人写的歧义
B: B错误；Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison和Jean Toomer's Cane不够对称， 不如E好； 歧义同A
C: 平行错误同A，C错误
D: 平行错误同A，D错误
E: E正确；the others being用法正确， Jean Toomer's Cane， Richard Wright's NativeSon， Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man平行的最漂亮完美： 不仅仅都是书， 而且都用了所有格
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
B✖ A✔
注意：A一定要仔细读完，确定错误的地方，读A时候不能太着急，不然总选不到A！！！
A: include主语是species，正确；which修饰killer whale，A正确；
B: B错误；growing修饰了species而不是killer whale；as big as和long重复， 用一个就好(size和length是同一概念)
C: being+adj.错误，C错误；growing错误同B
D: includes错误，D错误；long错误同B
E: includes错误，E错误；it is在从句中没有平行，run-on
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
句意：关于公众健康的担忧导致1876-1903期间为波士顿大都市服务的、3个分开的下水道系统的建造
A: A正确
B: 过去的事情，不用have been；between 1876 and 1904修饰concerns，句意错误，B错误；Between 1876 and 1904有修饰systems的歧义， 意思变成了systems只有在1876和1904年之间存在
C: 过去的事情，不用have been；Between 1876 and 1904放在lead后面修饰lead只在1876和1904年期间导致了construction， 而1904年以后又导致了其他事情， 改变句意； 表示动作的目的用to do而不用for doing， for doing是指某事物的具体用途， 而to do 则有目的的意思， 但用途和目的本来就有交叉的地方， 所以没有绝对规则， for doing有持久性的趋势， 而to do往往是一次性行为
D: D错误；there are表示的是自然存在， 不能用于concerns之前； Leading时态错
E: E错误；there are错误同D； between 1876 and 1904错误同C； for doing错误同C
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
B✖ C✔
考点：times比较的用法
注意：像这种划线句特别短甚至只有一个单词的，一定要带进去前后贯通阅读，理解句意和用法
A: A错误；X times as adij./adv. as，as不能单独用
B: B错误；X times more than, than必须要与比较级搭配
C: C正确；threes times the price that the drug's maker charges…
D: D错误；what修饰price，从句变成了the drug's maker charges price of price，逻辑错误
E: E错误；price是charge的直接对象（charge a price） ， 所以不需要再加介词， 直接that即可；charge at a price是错的， sell sth. at a price倒是可以的(另外price出现在at后面常表示代价)
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