【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day9

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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day9


1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.

D.workers needed to produce         

time needed by workers 错误，工人”做什么”需要的时间没有写明； "X so that Y" X 是朝着目标Y 所采取的行动,而needing time 并不是为了一个目标而采取的行动, so that +情态动词表示目的，整句的含义是：新器材把工人需要的时间减少了为了工人可以生产一吨煤，逻辑上不合理；they 指代workers 没有问题

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.

C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used

D.  In comparison 和whereas 语义重复；因为前面未划线部分用的是cannot，后面用can更加呼应。
E．In comparison 和whereas 语义重复；划线部分与前面未划线部分不对称，ineffective。

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.

B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeaster United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in 正确选项

sandpipers’ vanishing 事件与the grassy fields and old pastures 不对等。由于
like/unlike的比较相对严格，所以比较对象应尽可能接近，所以把in the northeastern
United States放在中间很awkward

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Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce         
E.workers need for their producing of
主干：New equipment and other improvements reduced…，needed by…
答案A
B限定了时间，句意错
CDE都是独立主格，
CE用了谓语，错误，应该用非谓语
D主被动错
2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used
答案C
A没有主句
B them无指代
DE in comparison和whereas意思重复

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in         
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

主干：Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs …，

答案B
剩下的都没主句

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CHENOlivia

我的答案：DCB
1.
A 不简洁
B when不对
C need in doing 搭配不对
E need for 不对； their doing不对
2.
Whereas 两个部分的主语要对等，排除AB
In comparison重复，排除DE
3.
like比较的对象要对等，排除ACDE

Ranyo

Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce         
E.workers need for their producing of

C*
A的逻辑有错误吧，有了时间以至于他们可以生产，很奇怪。
这道题应该选择D，应该从时态角度考虑。CE的一般现在时不对，都是发生在过去的事了。

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used

C*
DE的in comparison和前面的whereas在一起会redundant。
是stinger之间在比较，所以选择C。B的比较对象有误。
A错误很多：because和therefore一起出现；because以及后面的句子和前面的whereas一起出现；比较对象有误。

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in         
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

B*
这道题做过，有印象。
注意比较对象，是grassy fields和old pastures，与the bird itself在比较，很合理。A说高地鹬的消失，比较对象有误。C的比较对象也是消失这件事，而非这个鸟本身。D同理，比较对象有误。E不对，句子缺少主句。

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Day9
1.（193）New equipment and other improvements reduced the amount of time—from eleven hours in 1982 to six in 1988—needed by workers so that they could produce a ton of steel.
A.needed by workers so that they could produce
B.needed when workers are producing
C.workers need in producing
D.workers needed to produce         
E.workers need for their producing of

2.（194）Whereas the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and cannot be retracted from the skin, because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used again.
A.because the yellow jacket has a comparatively smooth stinger, it is therefore able to be pulled out and used
B.the comparative smoothness of the yellow jacket’s stinger allows them to pull it out and then can therefore use it
C.the yellow jacket’s stinger is comparatively smooth, and can therefore be pulled out and used
D.in comparison, the yellow jacket’s stinger is smooth, and thus able to be pulled out and used
E.in comparison, the yellow jacket has a smooth stinger, thus allowing it to be pulled out and used

3.（195）Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A.the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B.the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C.that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D.in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in         
E.in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

GMAT996

1. 时态错了 2. 主谓不一致  3. 主语成分缺失