【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day7

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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.that included
B.which includes
C.including 最简洁
D.some of which were
E.among them being

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,     
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to GMAT Being几乎都错，因为大部分时候都是多余的
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to  引起歧义：when compared to her native Germany, she was less successful
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in

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1.        C
2.        错选E  并列错误排BC，over the past twenty years修饰整个句子排AD
3.        C  AE主语重复，B being冗长，D比较对象错误

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1.D ❌ C
A：that限制性修饰，前不能加分割语义的都好，就近形容first term
B：incluses单三形式，which部分的修饰语就近修饰 first term❌，需要形容 several posts，主谓搭配不当
C：including有就近形容first term的嫌疑
D：were证明形容对象是一个复数名词，可暗示跳跃修饰several posts
E：them指代不当

2.A
A：
B：and are中的and并列不当，分句和主句相并列
C：and 同B
D：now drawing部分缺少谓语动词，只能被判断为现在分词表修饰，但语义上这部分应该是语义的核心，不能仅做修饰语
E：同D

3.C
A：she was 和 LJ两个独立分句之间缺少连词
B：being冗长；less和compared to都表比较重复累赘
C：
D：less 和 compared同B；when的用法很奇怪，就表明只有在比较时才是less的，而不比较时没有less（薛定谔的状态
E：同A

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