【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day 1

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1.（170）Margaret Mead, the best-known anthropologist of the twentieth century, helped shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with the relative merits of competition and cooperation.
B
A.shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with （like不能这样使用）
B.shape public opinion in such fundamentally important areas as attitudes toward children and families and
C.to shape public opinion about such fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, also about（like不能这样使用）
D.the shaping of public opinion for fundamentally important areas such as attitudes toward children and families, and those toward   （help+v要比这个shaping要好）
E.the shaping of public opinion around fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, and those of（like不能这样使用）

2.（171）One of the primary distinctions between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but in our ability to extend knowledge gained in one context to new and different ones.
C
A.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but（between…and…）
B.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill but instead（between…and…）
C.between our intelligence and that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill as  说
D.our intelligence has from that of other primates may lie not in any specific skill as   
(distinction …from…可能会更好些  尤其在这里的语义)（前面是省略了that吗）
E.of our intelligence to that of other primates may lay not in any specific skill but
(lay?)

3.（172）Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.
D
A.in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being
（前面introduced，应该是药物，不能用介词隔开）
B.in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were
（前面introduced，应该是药物，不能用介词隔开）
C.until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically
（前面introduced，应该是药物，不能用介词隔开）
D.life insurance in England remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically   

E.life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were
（between…and…）

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1. B
A：like 表举例
C：like 表举例，such like搭配不当；
also about与前面的about相并列，就是“对……的意见与对……的意见”，但后一个merits of 在语义上不应该是opinion about the merits of…，而应该是attitude and merits，并列不当
D：those同类指代attitudes，attitudes towards the merits of语义不成立
E：like 表举例，those 同D

2. C
A：between with搭配错误
B：between with搭配错误
D：intelligence作为动词主动发出has这个动作感觉很怪
E：distinctions of sb to sb，惯用语搭配很奇怪



3. C
没把握，错了

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1.（170）Margaret Mead, the best-known anthropologist of the twentieth century, helped shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with the relative merits of competition and cooperation.
选B
A.shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with  GMAT中举例用such as 不用like
B.shape public opinion in such fundamentally important areas as attitudes toward children and families and
C.to shape public opinion about such fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, also about GMAT中举例用such as 不用like
D.the shaping of public opinion for fundamentally important areas such as attitudes toward children and families, and those toward   help with sth.；并列错误，不是对合作竞争相对优点的态度
E.the shaping of public opinion around fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, and those of GMAT中举例用such as 不用like；help with sth.

2.（171）One of the primary distinctions between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but in our ability to extend knowledge gained in one context to new and different ones.
选C
A.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but 固定搭配错误
B.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill but instead 固定搭配错误
C.between our intelligence and that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill as
D.our intelligence has from that of other primates may lie not in any specific skill as 区别不是我们的智力has的，而是两者比较产生的     
E.of our intelligence to that of other primates may lay not in any specific skill but 语意歧义，变成了主要区别和主要区别之间比较

3.（172）Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A.in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being being修饰了insurance 错误
B.in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were between and固定搭配错误
C.until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically 形容词性修饰语放在最前，开放修饰语后面直接跟主语
D.life insurance in England remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically   
E.life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were between and固定搭配错误

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1.（170）Margaret Mead, the best-known anthropologist of the twentieth century, helped shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with the relative merits of competition and cooperation.

A.shape public opinion on fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, along with（Like 和 along with的用法语意感觉有点重复？）
B.shape public opinion in such fundamentally important areas as attitudes toward children and families and （Such...as举例）
C.to shape public opinion about such fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, also about
D.the shaping of public opinion for fundamentally important areas such as attitudes toward children and families, and those toward   
E.the shaping of public opinion around fundamentally important areas like attitudes toward children and families, and those of
（to shape 和shaping 上来排除，语意不直接）
2.（171）One of the primary distinctions between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but in our ability to extend knowledge gained in one context to new and different ones.

A.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lay not so much in any specific skill but
B.between our intelligence with that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill but instead
C.between our intelligence and that of other primates may lie not so much in any specific skill as （Between.... and.....固定搭配）
D.our intelligence has from that of other primates may lie not in any specific skill as      
E.of our intelligence to that of other primates may lay not in any specific skill but

3.（172）Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A.in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being
B.in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were
C.until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically
D.life insurance in England remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically   （明确主语是Life insurance直接排除ABC， E选项 in England 的位置不如D选项，容易使读者误解）
E.life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

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