28-30: Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin. A: with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting B: where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead C: with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting D: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results 根据比较对象一致原则，可以排除B,C; E的instead和unlike重复，排除；在A和E中就不确定了，我最后选的是D, 因为A的with 感觉很怪，具体哪里不对说不上来，而且 response to sunburn is more localized 也不如E的more localized response to sunburn简洁，不过E中的which指代好像也有问题，responses 还是sprains? 请NN们帮忙看看
支持E,until是介词，后面带分词，不需要考虑时态，这里自然不是现在完成时！如：before writing a letter,I read a book.介词短语修饰immobilize主语当然是swelling和stiffness，不会指代不清，关于instead，我想这里已经是插入成分了，甚至可以忽略，说它redundant是不是不合适呢？
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发表于 2005-9-28 14:10:00
