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Here are my thoughts …….. GWD28-Q8: ANS: C In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country’s size and that brought its western border within reach of the Pacific Ocean.
- In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country’s size and that brought
Which 修饰对象错误变成four cents an acre more than doubled the……. - For about four cents an acre the United States acquired, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country’s size and it brought
这里的it+ verb ……, 若为another new independent clause, 在and 前标逗号, 较佳. - With the Louisiana Purchase in 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, more than doubling its size and bringing
(Correct) - The United States, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, for about four cents an acre, acquired 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country’s size, bringing
修饰语误置, 容易看成: the United States, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803,. ……. the United States 在Louisiana Purchase 里, 逻辑上有问题 - Acquiring 828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country’s size and bringing
修饰语误置, 易误认为828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803,…….. 828,000 square miles 出现在Louisiana Purchase 里, 逻辑上有问题. Open to discuss ~~~
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