求大神解答一道语法题

greatsmf

A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.

• A A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included
• BThe exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
• CNellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
• DIncluded in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are
• E The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly included
• 这道题答案是B 我做对了，但是不是很明白为什么DE错了，解释也没怎么看懂。麻烦大神们给我解答一下！
• D有的解释说是are错，可是主语不是 exploits嘛？
• E 我觉得怪怪的但不知道具体怎么错，应该是改变了语义，但是我还是没怎么分辨得出来
• 做题时觉得所有格是个相对错误且确定B是更好的答案所以才选了B。
• 谢谢大家的解答
  

啊喂我是蚊子

D in the XXX意思不对
E 应该算一个重复 The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly
    the pioneer journalist 就是Nellie

open to discussion~

greatsmf

啊喂我是蚊子 发表于 2018-5-11 16:33
D in the XXX意思不对
E 应该算一个重复 The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly
    the pionee ...

谢谢您的解答！

AmPm

D选项主语缺失, 如果非要用D, 应该改为D. What included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are

E选项有歧义，不确定the pioneer journalist和Nelli是同一个人还是两个不同的人

个人看法 谢谢

greatsmf

AmPm 发表于 2018-5-12 19:39
D选项主语缺失, 如果非要用D, 应该改为D. What included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits ...

同意！               

ly1997

哈哈居然一路摸过来了...有点久远了相信你一定已经弄懂了，不过还是想挖个坟可不要打我。我自己的理解是：

D Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are
这里是想用倒装句型，included in a is b,相当于b is included in a。但是看划线句后面是circling，这不是一个能发出included这个动作的实意名词sth，因此错。

E The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly included
这里是语义错误，选项翻译过来是，前沿记者关于NB的功绩包括...，然而记者明明就是NB，E这样表达就成了好像这是两个人了，语义也不是很通～

希望能帮到你哈哈～

greatsmf

ly1997 发表于 2018-10-28 18:38
哈哈居然一路摸过来了...有点久远了相信你一定已经弄懂了，不过还是想挖个坟可不要打我。我自己的理解是：
...

我坐在图书馆一个暴风哭泣哈哈哈哈 时间久远但是帮我复习了一下知识点！ 果然是700+的大神 讲的很清晰 谢谢你哇

CoralUT

ly1997 发表于 2018-10-28 18:38
哈哈居然一路摸过来了...有点久远了相信你一定已经弄懂了，不过还是想挖个坟可不要打我。我自己的理解是：
...

有点小小的不同意
b is included是说b被包含，不是b发出被包含这个动作