[讨论] 一道难题

WalkByFaith

The artist Renoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.

as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden

as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged

as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged

during the arrangement of a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden

while they arranged a bouquet of roses that had just been picked from his garden

ans: C; out of my expectation; mine: D

三脚猫

分词spoken后是不能跟一个从句的。OG中有几个同样的例子，楼主可以留心一下

howardwang

d

WalkByFaith

分词spoken后是不能跟一个从句的。OG中有几个同样的例子，楼主可以留心一下

是说反对C吗？

我分析C句子是：

补全：（which is ) spoken as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged

WalkByFaith

C。as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged

主要是was being arranged不爽， open to discuss...

v22

i would preper C

in D,the arrangement of a bouquet of roses seems  awkward to me

howardwang

C有4点不好:

(1)as表示当...时候，一般用在口语中。

（2）being

(3)被动语态。

（4）分词后跟从句

所以，我还是支持D

WalkByFaith

agree first 3 points but the fouth one:

（4）分词后跟从句

as i said earlier, if you 补全：（which is ) spoken as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged,

you'll get a sentence rather than a 分词.

open to discuss

henryz

I would go with the sentence you've completed above. However, my answer is C.

The passage here is trying to decribe the moment when Renoir said the word.

"as" means "when".         We can simplify  C to : when a bouquet of roses was being arranged in a vase

But D did not reflect this original meaning. Another flaw of D is that when you link it with the rest, it just can not complete the sentence.

Henry

潜龙勿用

C is the best.Read the meaning of D, u will find D has logical error.