请教各路大佬 OG2018 SC 697 据说名字不长大佬看不见

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The foundation works to strengthen local and regional agricultural markets and cooperating with governments, improving access for farmers for productive resources such as land and credit.

A. cooperating with governments, improving access for farmers for
B. cooperates with governments to improve access for farmers to
C. cooperate with governments for improvements of access for farmers to
D. cooperate with governments and improve accessibility for farmers for their
E. in cooperation with governments to improve access for farmers for


正确答案是B。我的疑问是选项C具体的错误是什么？虽然句子C看起来不太简洁，但这很难做为判断标准。OG解释说 works to cooperate不太好，有意思重复，但是这一点也不够有说服力。求各路大神指点。非常感谢。

yougushizi

并列。works与corporates并列。如果选C，corporate就与strengthen并列，works to corporate with gov 不简洁

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yougushizi 发表于 2017-12-21 23:23
并列。works与corporates并列。如果选C，corporate就与strengthen并列，works to corporate with gov 不简 ...

是的，OG里的确是这么解释的。但我想请问除了不简洁，是不是还有别的理由不选C呢？因为不简洁这东西很不好判断。特别在考场的时候。感谢~

yougushizi

心无杂念向前冲 发表于 2017-12-22 05:43
是的，OG里的确是这么解释的。但我想请问除了不简洁，是不是还有别的理由不选C呢？因为不简洁这东西很不 ...

还有就是逻辑。C的意思是必须通过政府才能improve farmers' access to the fund and credit. 但实际上是foundation(基金会)就可以improve (D的意思).

MisterD

Verb用法优于Noun的用法 improve比 for improvement来的好

从语义角度  foundation works to strengthen markets 那么strengthening markets是目标
如果strengthen和cooperate平行  那么government和foundation的goal一样了
所以是foundation works to strengthen and cooperate and in order to improve access...
两个动作 一个目标