OG 18 新题743 关于宾语位置代词的缺失

Annasurlaroute

OG18 #743
To attract the most talented workers, some companies are offering a wider range ofbenefits, letting employees pick those most important to them.

(A) benefits, letting employees pick those most important to them
(B) benefits, letting employees pick the most important of them to themselves
(C) benefits and letting employees pick the most important to themselves
(D) benefits and let employees pick the most important to them
(E) benefits and let employees pick those that are most important to themselves




正确选项为A，根据OG的解释这道题的破题点为them和themselves，


但是我的疑问是BCD选项中的“Pick the most important”因为少了一个代词去refer前面的benefits，是不是也是错误的用法？


OG中关于A选项的those的解释：those refers clearly and concisely to benefits
（但是OG在错误选项中没有指出代词缺失作为排除错项的split，所以LZ来CD上求确认）


我自己造的句，求各位NN们指正：


EG1: Lily bought a lot of beautiful dresses in Paris , letting her friends choose those most beuatiful to them as gifts.---Correct

EG2: Lily bought a lot of beautiful dresses in Paris , letting her friends choose the most beuatiful ones to them as gifts. ---不是很确定，求NN解答


EG3: Lily bought a lot of beautiful dresses in Paris , letting her friends choose the most beuatiful to them as gifts. ---Wrong（？）




感谢！！！

杀G曼巴

我觉得B主要错在代词指代，them指代benefits，themselves指代employees，虽然看上去不是一个代词，但其实本质上这里是可以看成一个代词意味的
CD觉得主要问题是用and 分割了语义，缺失了原句中的因果联系；
至于你刚才说的那个问题，是的。
CD缺少了一个代词让后面refer to，A选项中就有一个those 定语前置，让后面的修饰可以真正去修饰

对于你举的3个例子
第3个毫无疑问是错的，理由刚才已经说了

至于第2个..我不知道你为什么要在最后加一个 as gift，e.g.后面也有as gift（想问一下，e.g1是有官方source证明是Right的吗？） 因为这里as gift的as是介词结构，是想修饰the most beautiful ones的，最好往前放，也可以作为插入语（看语境想表达什么了），如果没有as gift，我觉得第2个会更好

geleyun

杀G曼巴 发表于 2017-11-7 22:11
我觉得B主要错在代词指代，them指代benefits，themselves指代employees，虽然看上去不是一个代词，但其实本 ...

您好，请问themselves指代emplyees为什么逻辑上有问题呢？我在别的地方看到说这个themselves指代的是主语some companies？？这种解释正确吗？