这个句子是run-on结构吗

Samantha2014

Pensions are now viewed as a deferred payment of salary, workers are compelled to put away to take care of themselves in later years.

没有发现连词

xsq805

是run-on呢

Samantha2014

Pensions are now viewed as a deferred payment of salary, money a worker is compelled to put away to take care of one’s later years.
(A) a worker is compelled to put away to take care of one’s
(B) that a worker is compelled to put away to take care of oneself in
(C) a worker is compelled to put away to take care of oneself in
(D) workers are compelled to put away to take care of them in
(E) workers are compelled to put away to take care of themselves in

Samantha2014

xsq805 发表于 2017-10-31 15:58
是run-on呢

Pensions are now viewed as a deferred payment of salary, money a worker is compelled to put away to take care of one’s later years.
(A) a worker is compelled to put away to take care of one’s
(B) that a worker is compelled to put away to take care of oneself in
(C) a worker is compelled to put away to take care of oneself in
(D) workers are compelled to put away to take care of them in
(E) workers are compelled to put away to take care of themselves in
所以这道题应该选哪个啊~~我已经懵逼了~

xsq805

Samantha2014 发表于 2017-11-1 21:00
Pensions are now viewed as a deferred payment of salary, money a worker is compelled to put away t ...

我选的E，因为
1) "one's later years",是不对的，这里的one的用法是 强调“worker”，所以 oneself或者themselves更合适，因此A和D不对
2）主语是Pensions是复数，而 “，money blah blah” 是独立词组(absolute phrase) 是对于主语的延伸说明，所以a worker没有workers合适。因此 B 和 C不对
3）最后就是E了

我觉得 E 看起来不那么顺眼因为它omit了 “that”，原句应该是：“, money [that] workers are compelled to put away...." 不过英语中有这样的表达方式，如: The movie THAT we watched yesterday was great. = The movie we watched yesterday was great.

Samantha2014

xsq805 发表于 2017-11-3 16:17
我选的E，因为
1) "one's later years",是不对的，这里的one的用法是 强调“worker”，所以 oneself或者t ...

感谢大神！