OG18#725 老题 关于句子重心、伴随及时态

唐僧的格子裳

At the end of 2001, motion picture industry representatives said that there were about a million copies of Hollywood movies available online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available.

A online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available
B online and expect the increase of piracy with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
C online, and they expect more piracy to increase with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections
D online, and that they expected the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available
E online, and that they expected piracy to increase as high-speed Internet connections became more widely available

答案是E，但有几个关于D选项的疑问

1、是否预计“盗版增长这一行为”而非预计“盗版的增长”这个名词是句子想要表达的意思？（BD选项相同）
2、wound时态错误是否在于，如果as表示伴随，时态必须保持一致？如果as表示”因为“，则必须和前面的句子用逗号隔开？

跪求各位大佬指点！CD上搜了一下都没有这题，外网讨论都不在点上。

Fiona09

传送给楼主Helr大神的解释：https://gmat.la/question/OG2017-SC-724

唐僧的格子裳

Fiona09 发表于 2017-10-16 11:49
传送给楼主Helr大神的解释：https://gmat.la/question/OG2017-SC-724

现在明白啦，谢谢版主小姐姐。
今天看到后面OG18#737和#735，有关于逻辑关系和条件句、虚拟句、普通伴随的内容。现在能分得清了     

lisa001

非大佬，尝试回答。
and前后连接两个句子，意思是网上有很多好莱坞电影可以看，并且预计因为网络连接变更广泛后更普遍。and 后面需要一个句子，排除A、B。
C改变了句意，原句意是piracy to increase, 不是more to increase。with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections这个说法也不够简洁。with wider high-speed Internet connections available更好，并且这里用的特指，也不对。
D的问题，就是expect后面加一个宾语，但宾语用比较复杂的结构来修饰，比较怪的表达。

qye6

Fiona09 发表于 2017-10-16 11:49
传送给楼主Helr大神的解释：https://gmat.la/question/OG2017-SC-724

打不开！！是被和谐了吗？

qye6

唐僧的格子裳 发表于 2017-10-16 14:21
现在明白啦，谢谢版主小姐姐。
今天看到后面OG18#737和#735，有关于逻辑关系和条件句、虚拟句、普通伴随的 ...

能不能重新给个链接！！！谢谢啦！！！