【GWD-TN-23】一道关于when引导的从句的语法题~~

猴赛雷的Annie

[size=14.007px] Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765 to 1789, [size=14.0084px]a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make[size=14.007px] her one of the most valuable historians of the era

[size=14.007px](A) same as above

[size=14.007px](B) a vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing, that made

[size=14.007px](C) a vantage point that combined with her talent for writing, and it made

[size=14.007px](D) and this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make

[size=14.007px](E) and this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing, made
[size=14.007px]

[size=14.007px]这道题OA是E，我自己做的时候选了B；我不知道B错在哪里，网上翻老贴前辈指出“when可以引导状语从句和定语从句，在引导定语从句的时候需要有一个表示时间的先行词；在引导状语从句的时候需要有动作作为合理的修饰对象。如果将when放在that后面那这句话就是正确的；”


我的问题是为什么把when放在that后面就正确了呢？请各位NN帮忙进一步分析一下为什么B错了啊~~

猴赛雷的Annie

chenye666

我是ron神的搬运工~
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/because-she-knew-many-of-the-leaders-of-colonial-america-t2391.html
以下是ron神原话：
“actually, in choice b, 'when' doesn't refer to anything - there's no time period to which it could logically refer - and that's the main issue with choice b. (if you interpret it literally, as you must, then it implies that (1) sometimes the vantage point was combined with the writing and sometimes it wasn't, and (2) it only made her valuable when it was combined with the writing talent. that doesn't make sense.)”

猴赛雷的Annie

chenye666 发表于 2017-10-3 22:22
我是ron神的搬运工~
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/because-she-knew-many-of-the-leaders-of ...

谢谢你，Ron神大概说还是从句意去分析就好~~

chenye666

猴赛雷的Annie 发表于 2017-10-4 08:50
谢谢你，Ron神大概说还是从句意去分析就好~~

嗯呢~遇到不会的题，直接百度，看manhattanprep的网页，一般都会有ron神的解释~不过og题的解释比较少~

AMBER513

看一下！