OG 2017 SC

yingnuo

While Noble Sissle may be best known for his collaboration with Eubie Blake, as both a vaudeville performer and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying an independent career as a singer with such groups as Hahn’s Jubilee Singers.

(A) and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying
(B) and writing lyrics for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying
(C) and a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, he also enjoyed
(D) as well as writing lyrics for songs and Broadway musicals, he also enjoyed
(E) as well as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, he had also enjoyed

yingnuo

这题的正确答案是 C, 我的疑问集中在C和D之间。我个人不喜欢C是因为它有两个And。 D把其中的一个and 改成了as well as.
这样的话 both 后面还是有一个and的，所以我并不觉得这在语法上有错。这样只是把a vaudeville performer /writing lyrics for song先并列，然后 把这个整体和broadway musicals并列。

所以我想我的问题还是集中在D真的有错吗？为什么明明两个and这么出现很奇怪还是选C呢？

Fiona09

C选项的both+and是习惯用语，而D项的是both+as well as，搭配错误。

yingnuo

Fiona09 发表于 2017-9-25 15:37
C选项的both+and是习惯用语，而D项的是both+as well as，搭配错误。

但是这个句子后面还有一个and啊， 不能看成那个and是对应给both 的吗？

Fiona09

yingnuo 发表于 2017-9-25 16:19
但是这个句子后面还有一个and啊， 不能看成那个and是对应给both 的吗？

不能，both...and中间不能再也任何的连词了

Power2Bowen

你划线的部分画错了吧。。。。

yingnuo

Power2Bowen 发表于 2017-9-26 12:18
你划线的部分画错了吧。。。。

哪错了？

yingnuo

Fiona09 发表于 2017-9-25 16:25
不能，both...and中间不能再也任何的连词了

这样的啊？ 那我以后注意一下这个点看看。