人名+，代词（比如he) 这样的句子结构对吗？

ruobingxu

Nikola Tesla, the inventorof alternating current, because he was excited with the prospects of harnessingNiagara falls for producing electric power, he predicted in the mid-1890's that electricity generatedat Niagara would one day power the streetcars of London and the streetlights of Paris.
A.Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternating current, because he was excited withthe prospects of harnessing Niagara Falls for producing electric power, he
B. The prospects of harnessing Niagara falls toproduce electric power was exciting to Nikola Tesla, the inventory ofalternating current, and so he
C. Excited about the prospects of harnessing NiagaraFalls to produce electric power, Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternatingcurrent,
D. Nikola Tesla, the inventor of alternatingcurrent, excited about the prospects of harnessing Niagara falls for productionof electric power and
E. The inventory of alternating current, excitedwith the prospects of harnessing Niagara falls for producing electric power,Nikola Tesla


一道prep的题目，答案是C.
避免两个修饰语并列在一起，排除b,d,e


excited with      idiomatic 排除A  （当时不知道这个误选了A)
想想A的因果关系也不太对，因为对利用尼亚加拉瀑布发电很有兴趣，他预测了1890中期的供电情况。不是直接的因果关系。


把A缩写一下， Nikola Tesla , modifier ,because+clause, He+clause


再缩写一下，Nikola Tesla ,he + clause.


我觉得这样的句子结构好像也行啊？？


可有些中文网站的解释，说A是两个主语了。 既有Nikola ,又是he .?


希望得到指点！谢谢

mjm1996bfsu

A选项可划分为
Nikola Tesla【名词主语】, the inventorof alternating current【名词同位语】, because he was excited with the prospects of harnessingNiagara falls for producing electric power【完整句子结构】, he predicted in the mid-1890's that electricity generatedat Niagara would one day power the streetcars of London and the streetlights of Paris 【完整句子结构】.
这种情况下 Nikola Tesla只有主语，后面没有谓语结构，fragment，错误

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