28-30: Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin. A: with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting B: where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead C: with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting D: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results 我不知道该选A还是D。A觉得resulting不如results好，而D中“until it has healed”好像不应该用完成时吧。总之不知道哪个好，请NN们指导
D: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
首先我觉得D中现在完成式用的不恰当,一般用的现在完成式的句子中都有特定的时间状语,这里没有,还有我这里的it也有指代不清的嫌疑,如果指指代前面的swelling and stiffness,这里应该用复数代词,E中的instead只是个副词,我觉得并不影响句子的结构,所以我觉得E正确,请大家指教
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