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howardwang

Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, but sipping their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented.>>

B sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed to be disoriented, she noticed>>

C as they sipped their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented >>

D as they were sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed, she noticed, disoriented>>

E he seemed disoriented she noticed, sipping their coffee the next morning

    如果答案C的as前面没有句号或分号，而只是逗号，我觉得C就不能成为正确答案。理由是：as引导的是从句，如果你将as从句拿走或者放在句尾，就能清楚地看出C的问题，即将两个句子没有任何连词的用逗号连在一起，这在英文语法中，应该是不允许的。

As从句放在句尾，如下：

Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, she noticed that he seemed disoriented ，as they sipped their coffee the next morning。

所以，我觉得，只有A是正确选项，but是连词，后面是分词短语做定语，连词but将两个分句Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night和she noticed that he seemed disoriented.

分开。

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-8-24 13:11:22编辑过]

smilysnow

A肯定是错的，Sipping的逻辑主语是She，而她不可能喝着他们的咖啡。

howardwang

以下是引用smilysnow在2005-8-24 13:37:00的发言：
A肯定是错的，Sipping的逻辑主语是She，而她不可能喝着他们的咖啡。

不可以说，我喝了你们（大家)的咖啡吗？我觉得可以阿。

就算不可以，怎么解释C的问题呢？

howardwang

还请各位多发表自己的观点吆！

谢谢！

howardwang

给点意见，支持，反对，只要有个说法！

ESeraph

别折腾这道题了，我查了一下，这是道老题，原文but是不在划线部分中的，所以选C

howardwang

非常感谢 ESeraph

这样一来，c就比较完美了。否则，无论如何都难以理解的。

再次感谢！

yalemba2007

我觉得D比C还好. D中AS从句用过去进行时, 主句用过去时,难道不比C中主从句都用过去时好吗?白勇说D改变了强调的重心, 原句中强调的是SHE NOTICED THAT,而D中强调的是HE SEEMED. 的确是改变了强调重心, but so what,原句本来就是有毛病的, 谁也没说原句强调的是she noticed,我就还必须强调she noticed. 或许原句强调的本来就不是最好的呢?

我是不是有点钻牛角尖啊?

----GMAT, 不是GRE, 精解一题, 剩过泛读十题.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-11 0:15:47编辑过]

fantasy06

up.  D is better.

Discuss...

lbd2006

(D)  .... he seemed, she noticed, disoriented     

it's awarkwardness , it is not clear like the sentence " she noticed that ... "