A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.
A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.
(A) per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as
(B) annual per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs to about 60, more than twice as great as that
(C) California's annual per capita consumption of cigarettes declined from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as the drop
(D) California has seen per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs annually to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as that
(E) California has seen annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as that
请问D选项的annually该怎么理解?
是指香烟的人均消费每年都从125下降到60,还是说年人均消费125packs呢?如果是后者的话为什么不是annual而是annually呢?
有点不太理解这边的意思,求大神指点。
D) Annually modified verb decline. First (E) per capita and per person redundancy
Second, (E) is missing the essential phrase "a drop" in the last part. Without "a drop", it's unclear what the last phrase is modifying. If we read (E) literally, the last phrase is saying that "about 60" is twice as great as that in the nation, which is nonsensical.
Third, “that” does not have noun to represent.
A, B and C all begin with modification errors from gmatclub and Ron
谢谢,我刚才去曼哈顿论坛看了一下,再补充一句RON关于annually的理解:The second is sort of weird/awkward (it would be better written as "per year"), but, fortunately, weirdness/awkwardness is not an exclusive basis upon which any given answer will be incorrect.