OG16 121题！求指导！

跆拳九段31

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and


正确答案是C，我错选了E。这道题我主要疑惑的是语义，我觉得E可以很好地表达句意，BP，在她的插画中，认真的将插画和叙述协调起来并且（and）专注于她热切的观察和对自然世界的爱。
C是用which修饰了illustration，主句表达的是BP专注于她热切的观察和对自然世界的爱。
我从汉语角度不能理解这两个到底差在哪里？反而觉得E表达的更直接，求大神指点此类题如何从语义角度分析。怎么看出来在这里强调的是which修饰名词?

cyglight

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demiding

E 选项natives后面多了一个and.

emmahiggins09

E 主要有两个错误.

1/ pronoun them 作为宾语的时候如果它指代的先行词在prepositional modifying phrase 中，这个是不对的；如果硬是要指代prepositional modifying phrase 中的一个名词的话，就只能用C里 comma which 这样的形式

2/  in her boo illustrations 是作为插入语存在的一个modifier, 去掉后不应该对句子产生影响；而E选项如果去掉了这个插入语 , 那么就无法看出them 这里想表达的是什么了

这题研究价值杠杠的