TWE115, appreciate if anyone revise this for me.

JFK

115. Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not

to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with

the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer - planning or not planning for your leisure time?

Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.

Do you make a plan for your free time? Different people have different answers to this question. As far as I

am concerned, I prefer to make a basic plan for my free time rather than just sleep it away.

Making plan for my free time can make me get rest more fully and productively. On almost each weekend, I will go ahead according to my plan one day before made. Usually, I make myself clear that something must be done, such as

shopping, laundry, etc. and something could be done, such as the movie need to catch up, my car need to fill oil, etc.

The rest of activities is just have a good sleep. I long for a good sleep during the week because of heavy study burden.

I cannot study efficiently without good sleep, my memory tend to be slow, and my mind is not sharp enough to cope with

study. Therefore, a good sleep is an essential part in my weekend life. Good plan enables me enjoying good rest

without missing any other things.

In addition, making plan for my free time enables me to concentrate on my study during the week. I have everything I have

during weekend shopping, and relative arrangement. Actually, this is another merit of making plan for free times. Good plan for free

time is necessary condition for the good work during the week, however, good plan free time is not a sufficient condition for the good

work. We should not expect everything will be under control as long as we make our plan for free time. The important things is, in

addition to our plan, we need to implement our plan seriously.

Of course, make plan does not necessarily mean we stick to our plan without any possible allowance. Indeed, we need to response

to the changes accordingly.

Overall, I think make plans for our free time is very good for us to plan our work and life. With good plan for our free time,

we can fully control our life and enjoy the process.

pengstone

Do you make a plan for your free time? Different people have different answers to this question. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to make a basic plan for my free time rather than just sleep it away(not sure about this kind of usage, you may want to check it again).

Making plan for my free time can make me get rest more fully and productively(awkward, you can say"get a better rest"). On almost each weekend, I will go ahead according to my plan one day before made("go ahead" for what? not a clear expression). Usually, I make myself clear that something must be done, such as shopping, laundry, etc. and something could be done, such as the movie need to catch up, my car need to fill oil, etc ( You may want to use "prioritize"). The rest of activities is just have a good sleep. I long for a good sleep during the week because of heavy study burden. I cannot study efficiently without good sleep, my memory tend to be slow, and my mind is not sharp enough to cope with study. Therefore, a good sleep is an essential part in my weekend life. Good plan enables me enjoying good rest without missing any other things.

In addition, making plan for my free time enables me to concentrate on my study during the week. I have everything I have during weekend shopping, and relative arrangement (what is the meaning?). Actually, this is another merit of making plan for free times. Good plan for free time is necessary condition(prerequisite) for the good work during the week, however, good plan free time(???) is not a sufficient condition for the good work (I am confused about your point.). We should not expect everything will be under control as long as we make our plan for free time(???). The important things is, in addition to our plan, we need to implement our plan seriously.

Of course, make plan does not necessarily mean we stick to our plan without any possible allowance. Indeed, we need to response to the changes accordingly.

Overall, I think make plans for our free time is very good for us to plan our work and life. With good plan for our free time, we can fully control our life and enjoy the process.

    The most important thing is to state your points clearly.

JFK

Thank you, pengstone!