我的第一篇TWE，TWE049，大家帮忙指正->Zeros修改标题，见谅！

bigmouse

The issue of whether face-to-face conversation is better than other types of communication is complicated and debated one. Different people hold different view due to their respective background. Some people prefer face-to-face conversation. They think that face-to-face conversation can make communication clearer. On the other hand, others like other types of communication such as letter, e-mail, or telephone calls. They point out that when people are far away from each other, face-to-face conversation is impossible. As far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face conversation as a result of the following reasons.

First of all, one important reason why I choose face-to-face conversation is that face-to-face conversation can make communication more exact. When you talk to someone about some questions, they can hardly avoid the questions you care. You can ask them give you the serious answers. Therefore, there is at least the chance for misunderstanding to occur.

Second, face-to-face conversation can not only make others understand me but also allow me know about what others talk to me. When I make a face-to-face conversation with others, they can see my face, hear my tone, and feel my mood. In this way, they can deeply understand what I try to express. On the other hand, I can also understand others by my seeing, hearing, and feeling. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication.

Admittedly, there is no denying that other types of conversation have their own advantages. For example, e-mail or telephone calls can make us communicate with people who are far away. Moreover, e-mail can be saved in our computer. This can avoid some disputes in the future. However, these conversations can make others avoid answering what you really want know or make others not think seriously. In general, I think that these types of conversation do not have the advantages discussed above.

To sum up, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication. Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. I think that face-to-face conversation is a wise choice.

水滴石穿

以下是引用bigmouse在2005-8-6 17:32:00的发言：

The issue of whether face-to-face conversation is better than other types of communication is complicated and debated one. Different people hold different view due to their respective background. Some people prefer face-to-face conversation. They think that face-to-face conversation can make communication clearer. On the other hand, others like other types of communication such as letter, e-mail, or telephone calls. They point out that when people are far away from each other, face-to-face conversation is impossible. As far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face conversation as a result of the following reasons.

First of all, one important reason why I choose face-to-face conversation is that face-to-face conversation can make communication more exact. exactly   When you talk to someone about some questions, they can hardly avoid the questions you care. You can ask them give you the serious answers. Therefore, there is at least the chance for misunderstanding to occur.

Second, face-to-face conversation can not only make others understand me but also allow me know about what others talk to me. When I make a face-to-face conversation with others, they can see my face, hear my tone, and feel my mood. In this way, they can deeply understand what I try to express. On the other hand, I can also understand others by my seeing, hearing, and feeling. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication.

Admittedly, there is no denying that other types of conversation have their own advantages. For example, e-mail or telephone calls can make us communicate with people who are far away. Moreover, e-mail can be saved in our computer. This can avoid some disputes in the future. However, these conversations can make others avoid answering what you really want(to) know or make others not think seriously. In general, I think that these types of conversation do not have the advantages discussed above.

To sum up, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication. Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. I think that face-to-face conversation is a wise choice.

语法错误不多,偶认为写得不错.

bigmouse

谢谢水滴MM帮我指正里面的错误～～

感觉MM很认真的帮我看文章，MM是个nice的人～～～

而今迈步从头越

以下是引用bigmouse在2005-8-6 17:32:00的发言：

The issue of whether face-to-face conversation is better than other types of communication is complicated and debated one. Different people hold different view due to their respective background. Some people prefer face-to-face conversation. They think that face-to-face conversation can make communication clearer. On the other hand, others like other types of communication such as letter, e-mail, or telephone calls. They point out that when people are far away from each other, face-to-face conversation is impossible. As far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face conversation as a result of the following reasons.

First of all, one important reason why I choose face-to-face conversation is that face-to-face conversation can make communication more exact. When you talk to someone about some questions, they can hardly avoid (anwsering) the questions you care (ask). You can ask them (to) give you the(delete the?) serious answers. Therefore, there is at least the chance for misunderstanding to occur.(少用there is句型，而且这句话最好改一下)

偶得口语老师，一个老米说不管是口语还是书面语尽量避免用some，最好specific and detailed.动词也要准确到位

Second, face-to-face conversation can not only make others understand me but also allow me (to) know about what others talk to me. When I make a face-to-face conversation with others, they can see my face, hear my tone, and feel my mood. In this way, they can deeply understand what I try to express. On the other hand, I can also understand others by my seeing, hearing, and feeling. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication.

Admittedly, there is no denying that other types of conversation have their own advantages. For example, e-mail or telephone calls can make us communicate with people who are far away. Moreover, e-mail can be saved in our computer. This can avoid some disputes in the future. However, these conversations can make others avoid answering what you really want know or make others not think seriously. In general, I think that these types of conversation do not have the advantages discussed above.

To sum up, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication. Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. I think that face-to-face conversation is a wise choice.

偶是站着说话不腰疼啊，师兄不要见怪啊！其实偶觉得师兄写的不错啊，欧不见得写的有师兄好呢！

建议多用转折词，注意同义词的不同表达，注意一下长短句式的交替使用，可以背几篇阅读，看看老米是怎样表达的。

pumpkin

改一下标题吧，改成TWE049

pumpkin

The issue of whether face-to-face conversation is better than other types of communication is complicated and debated one. Different people hold different view due to their respective background. Some people prefer face-to-face conversation. They think that face-to-face conversation can make communication clearer. On the other hand, others like other types of communication such as letter, e-mail, or telephone calls. They point out that when people are far away from each other, face-to-face conversation is impossible. As far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face conversation as a result of the following reasons.

First of all 别用first, second, third了，比较太老了 , one important reason why I choose face-to-face conversation is that face-to-face conversation can make communication more exact  exact不能这样用的吧？. When you talk to someone about some questions, they can hardly avoid the questions you care  这个句子看不懂. You can ask them give you the serious answers. Therefore, there is at least the chance for misunderstanding to occur.

Second, face-to-face conversation can not only make others understand me but also allow me know about what others talk to me. When I make a face-to-face conversation with others, they can see my face, hear my tone, and feel my mood. In this way, they can deeply understand what I try to express. On the other hand, I can also understand others by my seeing, hearing, and feeling. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication.  人称变化太多了，不推荐

Admittedly, there is no denying that other types of conversation have their own advantages. For example, e-mail or telephone calls can make us communicate with people who are far away. Moreover, e-mail can be saved in our computer. This can avoid some disputes in the future. However, these conversations can make others avoid answering what you really want know or make others not think seriously. In general, I think that these types of conversation do not have the advantages discussed above.

To sum up, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication. Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. I think that face-to-face conversation is a wise choice. 结尾比较弱，能否加强下

pumpkin

The issue of whether face-to-face conversation is better than other types of communication is complicated and debated one. Different people hold different view due to their respective background. Some people prefer face-to-face conversation. They think that face-to-face conversation can make communication clearer. On the other hand, others like other types of communication such as letter, e-mail, or telephone calls. They point out that when people are far away from each other, face-to-face conversation is impossible. As far as I am concerned, I prefer face-to-face conversation as a result of the following reasons.

First of all 别用first, second, third了，比较太老了 , one important reason why I choose face-to-face conversation is that face-to-face conversation can make communication more exact  exact不能这样用的吧？. When you talk to someone about some questions, they can hardly avoid the questions you care  这个句子看不懂. You can ask them give you the serious answers. Therefore, there is at least the chance for misunderstanding to occur.

Second, face-to-face conversation can not only make others understand me but also allow me know about what others talk to me. When I make a face-to-face conversation with others, they can see my face, hear my tone, and feel my mood. In this way, they can deeply understand what I try to express. On the other hand, I can also understand others by my seeing, hearing, and feeling. Therefore, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication.  人称变化太多了，不推荐

Admittedly, there is no denying that other types of conversation have their own advantages. For example, e-mail or telephone calls can make us communicate with people who are far away. Moreover, e-mail can be saved in our computer. This can avoid some disputes in the future. However, these conversations can make others avoid answering what you really want know or make others not think seriously. In general, I think that these types of conversation do not have the advantages discussed above.

To sum up, I prefer face-to-face conversation rather than other types of communication. Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. I think that face-to-face conversation is a wise choice. 结尾比较弱，能否加强下

bigmouse

感谢pumkinMM的指点，很有启发，改进中