OG15第35题求助

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By 1940,the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, and she “earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be of dangerously experimental design.”（引号为划线句子） (A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be (B) earning them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew were (C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were (D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were (E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

正确答案E，
请教一下A 有什么问题呢？
多谢！

kaohaoquhuanqiu

at a time
when
重复了。
详细参考Manhattan语法第二章。

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kaohaoquhuanqiu 发表于 2015-12-21 11:12
at a time
when
重复了。

可是E也有at a time 和when 啊

kaohaoquhuanqiu

对呀。。我去找原题看看~感谢楼主啊

RichardChenWANG

我做这么多题 答案一般都出现在SO that 句型上的 我记得这题 我直接找了so that 句型 直接定位E 屡试不爽

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RichardChenWANG 发表于 2015-12-21 11:39
我做这么多题 答案一般都出现在SO that 句型上的 我记得这题 我直接找了so that 句型 直接定位E 屡试不爽 ...

OG的解释貌似是说A的表达特别啰嗦，直接用earned就可以搞定，但是讲真，我没感觉啰嗦在哪

kaohaoquhuanqiu

我当时做对了，就没仔细看解释，不应该啊。

kaohaoquhuanqiu

og中说A是错在 “so .. that”的用法了
so new for many 太复杂了，不够简洁。

我当时做这题，因为看到records，直接排除前三个，从最后两个选的，看E最简洁就选的。

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kaohaoquhuanqiu 发表于 2015-12-21 11:52
og中说A是错在 “so .. that”的用法了
so new for many 太复杂了，不够简洁。

我是先根据so such that把C和D排除了，又看到records是被earned排除了B，尽管E感觉比A好些，可是一直没有吃透到底怎么不好，因为我感觉A中的them也指代清楚，指代records。

kaohaoquhuanqiu

so..that..
that后面的程度状语，是对“so..."进行补充说明的。
就是固定用法。。